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Post by PurekitandTerror on Tue Feb 04, 2014 10:24 pm

"Y-Yeah im new" tail swishes over the ground, "Ive been here a few days now, im still getting used being around so many cats!" purrs a bit in amusment
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Post by MiseryCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 3:40 am

Okay, I wasn't sure what you meant. I assumed you meant you'd only want her trained for like a week or something. Razz



MiseryCloud turned and gave a swift nod to Proudfire, "Hopefully not," she meowed. SHe playfully cuffed his ear then padded out of the camp, ready to start her patrol.
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Wed Feb 05, 2014 9:04 am

Smokeclaw watches pure talk to the leader. She then got up and says"um howlingstar if it is alright with you can i take this kit as my own kit please.
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Post by Raven on Wed Feb 05, 2014 7:17 pm

The beautiful young she walked into the flowering camp of her clan mates. "Here we are, This is SombreClan. Im sure you would like it here if you stayed. Oh and my name is Wishingfeather, who are you young one?" She asked softly as her young hazel eyes glowed with intrest.
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 7:20 pm

"im Coco" I say almost feeling like its a name no one would think of.Then I stared in awe at the camp even though it seemed cold an wyndy.

*did you get the pun yet?*
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:25 pm

Turns gaze on the light brown shekit with dark brown paws and i lighten up a bit and trot over tail swishing. "Hi" mews kindly, is obviously way smaller then the shekit but acts like im a full grown warrior. "Im Pure" My soft gaze is like chips of ice but glowing warmly with understanding of what the kit is feeling right now. "Everyone in Sombreclan is nice i promise you, you dont have to be afraid"
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Post by Raven on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:29 pm

"Nice to meet you Coco, Hi Pure." The she greeted the small kit. "Are any of you hungry?" She asked waiting for a reply.
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:35 pm

"Im Coco!" I mew happily before turning to WishingFeather "yes im very hungry" I say
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:36 pm

Guiltily looks at the fresh-kill pile and the large snowshoe rabbit i killed. Doesnt mention about the prey but looks up at the kind shecat "Im fine, im not used to eating a lot, i had something yesterday" Shrugs it off turning head back to coco. "Are you hungry?" Bounds over and picks up the snowshoe hare dragging it back and setting it at her dark brown paws. "Here, have it"
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:39 pm

*I looked at the earlier coments and it seemed like it was unrealistic so you had to put off the hunting thing*

"T-thank you" I say feeling guilty yet happy about the silver she-kit giving me the rabbit and my ears drop down abit but I eat it happily
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:50 pm

*that was part of my lecture about not going out of camp thats why i looked at the rabbit guiltily, but i still caught it, it was wounded. If you looked at its leg and was an easy picking*
Bushy tail swishes over the ground turning my head to the nursery, "Ive got whitecough im not supposed to go in there but i can get faintkit to show you" I mew kindly looking back at the shekit.
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:52 pm

*oh*

I looked up and felt even more guilty about how greedily I have been eating the rabbit "were exactly?" I ask confused
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:55 pm

"Follow me" I mew and turn swiftly and bound over to the nursery entrance. "This is were us kits stay until we're apprentices" I back up a few paces stifling a cough until now, i cough hard my sides heaving. "S-sorry" I shake my head my breath coming in rasps now.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 8:58 pm

"I-its ok... I-I hope you feel better soon Pure" I say looking at her,coughing "so this is where ill be staying?" I say
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Wed Feb 05, 2014 9:39 pm

Smokeclaw smiles and lookes at the new comers. Shethen get upand walks over to them and days"hellow theremy name is Smokeclae what are your names?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Wed Feb 05, 2014 9:55 pm

*theres only one silly! and Im a kit :/*

"I-im Coco" I say my ears perking up abit but not by much
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Thu Feb 06, 2014 11:29 am

Smokeclaw says"hellow there CoCo, so are you lost?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:41 pm

The huge golden furred maine coon tom appears from the entrance of the warriors den, the sun glistening hs fur, he blicks his light celadon eyes loocking at his white paws and he stretches with a meow of comfort for himself. He loosk around before padding over to the fkp but stopping and looking about the clan, he sits on his hindlegs beside the warror den watching the clan. he speaks softly under his breath-"A new clan. A new life."-the young warrior said softly-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:57 pm

"no,I was brought here" I say calmly my ears flicking abit at the word lost
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:05 pm

Blazespirit looks around, his celadon eyes tuning around to his back side licking his pelt, then he rubs his ear with a paw, he turns his attention to the commotion in the clearing, he sighs and pads toward it with mighty steps, the very huge maine coon bounding over-
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:11 pm

I look at the Maine Coon confused Was he a clan member hes huge!
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:16 pm

Blazespirit bounds over and loosk around, he had just joined the clan but he was already heard of as "The Lion spirit" before he even joined. He looks around at the cats, they probably didn't know him yet-"I'm Blazespirit"-he glances at the kit below his paws-"Hello small one"-he leans his head way down-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:18 pm

I looked up at him "Hello!" I mew happily "Im Coco whats you name?"
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:20 pm

Blazespirit smiles and purrs with a mix of happiness and laughter. He opens his eyes after he finished purring with laughter, his eyes were a very light celadon color. He looks at the small cat and he smiles-"I just told you!!!"-he smiles and lowers his head, this cat even had a fluffy mane, long furry tail-

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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:23 pm

(I know I took a quick look :3)

I laugh "Right silly me!" I say tripping over my chocolate brown paws and falling face first into the dirt
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:26 pm

(What do you think? Is it a good character?)

Blazespirit stares at the small kit and as soon as she started to trip he lashed his fluffy paw underneath her catching her ont he top of his giant paw, he steadies the kit after laughing softly-"Clumsy much?"
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:30 pm

(it seems like a great character! I just made a Wolf character by the way)

"Yeah,but I think its more of the fact im kind of tired" I say shocked at how big his paw is
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:33 pm

I checked it out.)

Blazespirit chuckles softly at the kit-"Adder got your tough?"-he says with a soft amused purr, he guaranteed no one knew who he was. He had an ancestor with the same name who was named ~The lion~ for his heroic actions in the ancient 4 clans. His ancster died of a battle with an enemy who outnumbered, they say his ancestor could roar like a true lion. He stares at the kit and smiles-
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:39 pm

I nod "your huge!" I mew in awe sten staring at my small chocolate brown paws mentally comparing them to BlazeSpirit
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:42 pm

Blazespirit purrs in amusement and he watches the small kit stare at her own paws and he smiles and walks over sitting down behind the small kit on his hind legs on either sid of her and puts his 2 front paws beside hers making it a comparison-"I think I have bigger paws. Just a little...."-he says with a smile and purrs in sarcastcm-
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:44 pm

I laugh "more like you have paws the size of the ummm moon!" I say falling on my back
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:46 pm

Blazespirit laughs and then pounces over the kit with a very small hop and then he looks over his shoulder at the kit, he smiles and lays on his side and curls up in a large furry circular-
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:48 pm

I laugh and try to pounce over him but instead I land ontop of him and slide off
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Post by Raven on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:48 pm

The young she looked about the kit and a tom as she sat next to Coco. "Coco I'll grab you something to eat, how's a mouse?" She spoke softly to the kit before adding, "And I have to check up on Sandkit. So I maybe gone just a bit longer. You should also get into the nersury from this ran and wind." She soaking wet silver tabby meowed before padding off in swift delicate paws.
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Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:51 pm

Blazespirit looks at the she-cat and he smiles with a friendly purr before pulling the kit close with his huge fluffy til-"My fur can protect you from the rain until you want to go in the nursery"-he said to coco-
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Post by RosePawandCloud on Thu Feb 06, 2014 8:06 pm

I nod "ok" I say to both BlazeSpirit and WishingFeather
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Post by HowlingStar on Thu Feb 06, 2014 9:05 pm

LionClan is modern within the series. There is no LionClan on GBMP. The old four clans were perished. Overtime, four new clans rose. TempestClan, RillClan, SombreClan and ValiantClan. There is no LionClan.

Rowanpelt wrote:Rowanpelt nods to the she-cat with a soft smile that disappeared as easily as it showed up-"My ancesters were Lionclan. And this Old Thunderclan warrior from the ancient clans is my dearest ancestor. Lionheart was his name"-he said shaking the rain from his goldenpelt-

Ravenpaw wrote:Wishingfeather entered as she heared Blazespirit roar like a lion. "Sounds just like our very first ancestors. LionClan would be better fitting." She meowed as her eyes widened with alert and curiosity. "Here Coco." She said setting down the mouse, she shook out her long silver locks to free her pelt from the rain.

This sort of stuff is getting too dramatic and needs to be posted in Mini-Character Plots if you wish to create drama. However, all characters born into the four main and current clans, have ancestors, somewhat, which lead back to Thunderclan and stuff. You can't just make up that your character has more ancestor and more special than everyone else. Especially with this LionClan stuff. LionClan is a modern clan within the books, not old. The new clans here are the modern clans of the series, if you wish.




WyndDragon wrote:I nod "Yeah where is HammyStar?" I ask confused stretching abit

Are you serious? Edit your post if you make a mistake. Don't make up words, please. Be realistic.




Rowanpelt wrote:Blazespirit smiles and looks about, his eyes scnning the clearing, he sighs and stands stretching int he rain , the lion like cat yawning with long teeth showing, he licks the insid of his mouth and sides of his jaws before sighing-"Wheres the leader. Howelstar I believe. I wish to join in the regular duties if 9 am to stay"

9AM? Since when can cats tell the time, using human like terms?
Check the Ultimate Warrior Cat Guide for terms, please.




xxRyannexx1001 wrote:*that was part of my lecture about not going out of camp thats why i looked at the rabbit guiltily, but i still caught it, it was wounded. If you looked at its leg and was an easy picking*
Bushy tail swishes over the ground turning my head to the nursery, "Ive got whitecough im not supposed to go in there but i can get faintkit to show you" I mew kindly looking back at the shekit.

How and when did you catch this rabbit, huh? Your character is a KIT. Please just act like one instead of Roleplaying like a warrior. While your character has learned to defend and feed itself, it does not suddenly make it this amazing and incredible hunter, regardless of the fact that the prey was wounded/hurt. How did your character suddenly hunt a rabbit in the middle of camp? It seems the rabbit just "appeared" there.




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HowlingStar pads in, from his den. He glances across to Coco and slightly frowns. "Can I help you?" He muttered, his head tilt to the side.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Thu Feb 06, 2014 9:19 pm

Blazespirit pads in from the forest, the rain stoning his muscular furry shoulders and pelt as he had prey in his jaws, he suddenly stops when he sees the leader in the clearing, he hadn't met he leader yet but he has already heard of him. He held 2 mice in his jaws, 1 average size and the other plump, he sets then down where the fkp is and pads over to the kit cco then looks at howlingstar, he knew it was the leader by the description people have told him, he nods his head in deep respect-"Hello Howlingstar. SOrry if I said your name wrong. I'm Blazespirit."-he said softly, glancing at the kit-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Thu Feb 06, 2014 10:09 pm

Has kept a distance from the large cat shyly my icy blue gaze darting side to side my paws shuffling. Looks down at myself and notices how puny i am even at my age im way smaller then a normal one and a half moon old kit. "Will I even be useful at my size..?" I whisper to myself out of earshot of everyone dropping my gaze quickly to my paws.

*I had caught that rabbit yes, and if you looked at the earlier comments you would see that it was wounded and i caught it before people had told me kits were not supposed to leave the camp Razz*
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by MiseryCloud on Fri Feb 07, 2014 12:57 am

You should know that kits aren't allowed to leave the camp. Therefore, you should have not "caught" rabbit in the first place. Tighten up your realism, please. I don't want to hear anymore on the rabbit and how Pure is such good hunter and fighter yet she's only a few moons old. It's unrealistic. So, I suggest you leave it. End of discussion.

The fluffy black she-cat entered. She approached Howlingstar's side then glanced towards Coco, "A kittypet?" She meowed in confusion as she examined the kit. MiseryCloud's vibrant green eyes caught a glimpse of Blazespirit, "Hello," she said.




The name "Blazespirit" is actually unrealistic. The term "spirit" is scared and not used within the clans.

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A moderator approved you, however..It seems odd.
Uuumm. I'll speak to Jason and see what he thinks we should do. We may be able to allow it, or we may have to ask you to change it.. :/
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Pigeon on Fri Feb 07, 2014 6:34 am

The fawn colored deputy padded into the camp entrance, her white whiskers twitched in amusement.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Fri Feb 07, 2014 2:41 pm

"um uh yes..." I mew my ears droping down onto my scull and my fur pricking up alittle
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Fri Feb 07, 2014 6:42 pm

The golden warrior looks at the small kit coco and he lets out a soft purr, his eyes softening toward the small kit. The warrior had a soft spot for kits-"Howlingstar, I believe the small one wishes to join your clan."-he says looking at coco before smiling spftly, he pads over and whispers into the other kits ear, lowering himself which strained his neck slightly-"I've met quite a few smaller cats who are great warriors. Size doesn't matter. It's your heart and spirit that count."-he then licks the kits left ear and raises his head again looking at the deputy and the other warrior. His eyes dart to the she-cat who spoke and he nods his head in a greeting-"Hello."

(I've had Blazespirit on many other warriors rolepay. They all gave me some typ of memo about that. They accepted me because my character some how made sense. Please, I've had Blazespirit for 2 years now. Please don't make me change him)
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:06 pm

I purr and nod then look over to HowlingStar hope in my eyes "please!!! I want to join!" I say
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by HowlingStar on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:30 pm

HowlingStar gave a warm smile to Coco, "Are you sure you have what it takes to become one of us? Clan life is far from luxurious. We feel hunger during the colder times and we fight to survive. The forest can be dangerous but clan-life can be very rewarding, too. If you feel you are prepared to leave behind your old life, then I accept you into my clan. But, a cat cannot live with a paw in each world."
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:33 pm

Blazespirit sits down on his hindlegs, warmness in his gaze and he smiles at coco. He studied the small kitten looking for signs of a warrior. ~"Enthuisiasm. Courage. Staina."~ He states in his mind about the kit, he padded and sat down ont he other side of Howlingstar and smiles softly, he liked the leader, he was a very respectable cat-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:38 pm

I nod "Yes im very very sure!" I say stubbornly my head high
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:46 pm

Blazespirit softly smiles and looks over at his leader, he sighs and stretches his limbs and pads over to the kit and lowers himself-"Welcome to Sombreclan Coco..."-thinks foir a moment and sighs putting his paw to his forhead then laying it down beside the kit-"You need a suitable name."-he said with a smile before purring, he smiles cheesily-"How old are you?"-he ask the small kit with a smile-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by RosePawandCloud on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:52 pm

"Im 5 moons" (I would say months because im or used to be a kittypet but I don't want any unrealistic stuff to happen its scary) I say "Why does this have to do with a suitable name?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:59 pm

Blazespirit smiles and stretches lightly looks at his leader with a slight purr of amusement-"Howlingstar, I hope you don't mind if I step in..."-he steps in front of his leader and then pads to the kit and smiles-"Let's see if you can dodge..... It's time you train a little bit. To prove you have what it takes."-his muscles ripple as he gets in a fighting stance, low to the ground, one paw in front of another. Ears back, eyes dilating small and tiny streak-"I want you to dodge my attack. Ok?"-he says getting ready-
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