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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:13 pm

Smokeclaw walks away sadly. She want someone to talk to she has tries to make friends but no one has notice she was even there. Sad
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Post by Aurora on Fri Jan 31, 2014 3:10 am

Chestnutpool approached the she-cat curiously. "Hello." She chirped, amber eyes bright. "You new here?"
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Fri Jan 31, 2014 1:03 pm

Smokeclaw look at the she-cat and says"yes I am my name is Smokeclaw. What is your name?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Guest on Fri Jan 31, 2014 4:41 pm

Sand wasn't sure what to answer Wishingfeather. "I don't know, mom leaves alot but comes back with food, i didn't really do much though." She answered before seeing another cat in her face, checking her over. "I feel fine." She leans again Wishingfeather. "So what happens now?" She asks still believing her mom was coming back even though she hadn't showed up yet.
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Post by Aurora on Fri Jan 31, 2014 5:09 pm

"Chestnutpool." The warrior replied curtly, letting her tail brush the ground lightly as she sat down.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by HowlingStar on Sat Feb 01, 2014 1:12 am

"Hey, Smokeclaw," the silver-tabby tilt his head to the new warrior, his golden eyes warm. "I'm HowlingStar, welcome to the clan."
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Post by Pigeon on Sat Feb 01, 2014 3:58 am

"Go inside to the Nursery, Sand," the fawn colored deputy meowed, a warm smile spread across her maw. "It'll be nice and warm in there."
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:28 am

Smokeclaw look at the leaderand dipes her head and says"thank you Howlingstar." She then look at the she-cat and noddes.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by HowlingStar on Sat Feb 01, 2014 11:36 pm

HowlingStar released a loud and content purr then turned his head, "I'm going to go into my den for a bit. I'll be there if anyone needs me," he said. And with that, the silver-tabby ducked into the leader den.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 1:01 am

I entered behind Howlingstar from the long trip from the border to camp and gasped as i looked around in amazment. I went to the far side of the camp and crouched down carefully rarley making eye-contact with any other cat and staring at my paws.
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 8:41 am

Smokeclaw look at the new comer and walked over to the cat. He says"hi there mu name is Smokeclaw what is yours."
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:58 am

"Im... Pure..." Meows cautiously looking at Smokeclaw with my enchanting icy blue stare. Tries to stifle a cough but fails, i cough wretchedly and shake my head trying to look like it was nothing.
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 12:58 pm

Smokeclaw smiles and says"are you new here." She says do you want to go out hunti g with me?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 1:17 pm

"Really? Hunting with me? I know how to hunt im just surprised a warrior wants to hunt with a kit!" Whiskers twitch in excitement and i jump to my soft white paws. "You'll be surprised" I mew my tail lashing.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Raven on Sun Feb 02, 2014 1:23 pm

Foxxy wrote:Sand wasn't sure what to answer Wishingfeather. "I don't know, mom leaves alot but comes back with food, i didn't really do much though." She answered before seeing another cat in her face, checking her over. "I feel fine." She leans again Wishingfeather. "So what happens now?" She asks still believing her mom was coming back even though she hadn't showed up yet.

Wishingfeather nodded to Sand she was about to when the clans deputy came up and told sand to the nersury. " Yes, you would be warmer there. I will try to see you every day." She meowed as she licked the kit on the head, "There are also other kits in there, you may make new friends." She smiled before getting up and nugging the sand colored kit to the den.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 1:58 pm

Smokeclaw started to walj out of canp. She wanted to walk to the tarritory and go out hunting.
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:08 pm

Follows Smokeclaw tail curling in the air as i walked. "what spot do we hunt in first?" i purred as i tasted the air.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Aurora on Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:17 pm

Chestnutpool grabbed the kit by her scruff gently, setting her back down away from the entrance. "Where do you think you're going, little one?" The brown she-cat smiled out of amusement.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:26 pm

Smokeclaw smiles and says"I like to hunt near the river but we can't becouse of the flood so we will hunt around here." She stopes and sniffes the air, she smelt rabbit, thrush, blue bird and exetra. She look at the kit and said" o mouse-dug you weren't suppost to follow me sorry come on let get you back to camp." She pickes up the kit and bring the kit back to camp.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:30 pm

"Kits have to stay at the camp?" Head tilts in confusion. "I always go out and hunt! I caught a rabbit just yesterday!" Mews in protest
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:39 pm

Smokeclaw says"what you should hsve not done that." She walks back imto the camp and put the little kit down near the nusery.
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:18 pm

Head tilts in complete confusion "Why not..?" I mew innocently my icy blue gaze troubled and crestfallen. My tail droops to the ground. Pelt prickles as i gaze at the nursery, has never actually been in there and i dont know what to expect if i go in. Ears flatten against head and i go to back up.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Aurora on Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:44 pm

The lithe warrior bent down and rested her cheek against Purekit's side. "I'll come to the nursery with you and introduce you to everyone, if you'd like." She smiled, nudging the kit towards the den. "You'll be spending most of your time there until you're six moons old, so might as well get to know everyone here and get comfy. I'm Chestnutpool, by the way. What's your name?"
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:54 pm

"i-im Pure..." Looks at the lithe brown warrior curiously and uncertainly. "Im new here... Howlingstar said he'll keep a lookout for my mother, but i know shes not coming back for me" Mews darkly hopelessness in tone and i sighed turning head back towards the direction of the nursery, "Uh.. Sure, id like to meet some of the kits"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:15 pm

Smokeclaw lookes at purekit and saysz"would you like me two comebin snd stay with you until you get confentable?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:21 pm

*its not purekit yet i was abandoned by my mother and Howlingstar took me in but im not an official member even though im on the sombreclan list. So its still just "Pure" not "Purekit" ok :3*

"Uh-Um sure" Studders a bit still wondering if the kits in there will be kind or not. "I-Is there a lot of kits like there are warriors and apprentices..?"
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Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:29 pm

Smokeclaw smiles and says"come on let go it and yes there are a lot of kits in the nursery but they are all kind and friendly i promise you."
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Aurora on Sun Feb 02, 2014 6:08 pm

"You'll be called Purekit soon enough, once you're officially accepted into the clan." She added thoughtfully. "We all have a suffix after our names. Once you reach 6 moons, you'll be called Purepaw until you become a warrior." The feline explained, keeping an eye on the entrance of the nursery for any signs of the other kits.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Feb 02, 2014 6:37 pm

"ok" Mews a bit more cheerfully and trots over to chestnutpool and Stormclaw. "Thank you for being kind" smiles.
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Post by HowlingStar on Sun Feb 02, 2014 7:08 pm

Please Roleplay realistically. Kits cannot leave the Camp, let alone hunt. Apprentices can leave the camp,  but, have to be with warriors and/or their mentors. Razz

Also, it is not SombreClan that has been affected by the flooding. SombreClan is not flooded, it merely has high winds and constant rain. We have not flooded. xDD




The silver-tabby shuddered at the cold winds, his ears flattened against his head. "Pure, you should go inside the Nursery. It is much too cold out here for kits," he said.
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Post by Guest on Sun Feb 02, 2014 8:10 pm

Sand looks at the cat who was deputy and looks around not sure where this nursery was at, Wishingfeather started nudging her in the direction and Sand went willingly.

(I'm going to post Sand in the nursery.)
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Post by Raven on Sun Feb 02, 2014 8:36 pm

('kay i'll post there to have her settled in.)
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Feb 02, 2014 9:27 pm

Smokrclaw look at the young kit and says"no problem little one now come over here and let me share touges with you."
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Post by HowlingStar on Mon Feb 03, 2014 9:17 pm

HowlingStar observed the kits then tilt his head towards the middle of the camp, his eyes were soft and warm.
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Post by Kitepaw on Mon Feb 03, 2014 9:32 pm

A pale form slips into the camp on light paws, her blue eyes wide and warm regardless of the wind buffeting her pelt. She doesn't announce her presence to Smokeclaw, Howlingstar and the others, but she appears to be looking for someone as she pads through the camp.
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Post by HowlingStar on Mon Feb 03, 2014 9:41 pm

The silver-tabby pricked an ear and glanced around the camp. The leader gave the she-cat a warm bow of his head then continued to blissfully gaze around, watching everyone.
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Post by Flare on Mon Feb 03, 2014 10:14 pm

"Hi, HowlingStar," The cheery she cat padded in and dipped her head, tossing her long, fluffy tail.
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Post by Pigeon on Mon Feb 03, 2014 11:12 pm

The fluffy fawn colored deputy tilt her head then yowled, as if signaling she had something of importance to say. "The past few sunrises have been very cold, the wind is high and the rain is heavy. Kits need to stay in the Nursery where it is warm as with queens and elders. The hunting patrol for dawn will be lead by myself and accompanying me will be Feralclaw, Smokeclaw and BattlePaw. MiseryCloud will then be leading the dawn border patrol and will check each border carefully and thoroughly, following her will be Wishingfeather, Cherryshine and Kitepaw."

The fawn colored deputy then nodded to Miserycloud then tilt her head towards SnakeHiss. "SnakeHiss will then be leading the sun-high hunting patrol with Flamingshadow, Morningflower and Fleckmist. Chestnutpool will then take the border patrol with Braveheart, Iciclebreath and MaplePaw. And finally, the moon-high hunting patrol and border patrol. These patrols are the last patrols of the sunrise, so, ensure they're marked well. Cunningbreath will lead the hunting patrol and be accompanied by Crosspaw, Islandpaw and Honestynight. And, HowlingStar will take the moon-high border patrol with Viperpaw, Serenitypaw and Grousewarmth."
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Mon Feb 03, 2014 11:57 pm

"Can i ask you something Howlingstar..?" Lifts gaze to the tabby a hint of nervousness but determination in eyes. "I know my mothers never coming back, if she was she would've come by now. Ive been abandoned" Flattens ears against head, "With your permission, id like to join Sombreclan"

(Sorry, but if u think about it pure's mother abandoned her half a moon ago, she taught herself how to hunt in her own way otherwise she would've starved to death a while ago. And she knows a bit on defending herself too because she's encountered a lot of rouges on her way to Sombreclans territory. Mentoring her will probably not take as long :3)


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Post by Kitepaw on Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:24 am

Kitepaw pauses while the deputy speaks, her snowy ears softly perked. Then she nods to herself slightly, walking off to the apprentice den to rest for the dawn's duties.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by MiseryCloud on Tue Feb 04, 2014 3:05 am

xxRyannexx1001 wrote:

(Sorry, but if u think about it pure's mother abandoned her half a moon ago, she taught herself how to hunt in her own way otherwise she would've starved to death a while ago. And she knows a bit on defending herself too because she's encountered a lot of rouges on her way to Sombreclans territory. Mentoring her will probably not take as long :3)

I'll give you credit for creativity, but the realism of this is wrong.
Your character is very young and not even 2 moons old. A kit which is two moons old would not be able to hunt nor fight. In fact, it is surprising she managed to find SombreClan in the first place, but, it isn't impossible if she was smart which she must be. The kit would have had to scavenge for food and/or hide if danger came lurking because of her age and inability to hunt successfully. Therefore your theory on cutting down her training time is incorrect and she will be trained the same time length as any apprentice. Luckily, though, with apprentices there is no training time limit, but, it usually takes 6 moons, so, cats are usually around 12 moons old when they become a warrior, but, they can become a warrior earlier or later, depending on when the leader feels they are ready to become a warrior. GBMP's aging system can be located in the Ultimate Warrior Cat Guide under "Roleplay Information" ^-^




MiseryCloud's fluffy black ears pricked at the sound of her name. She nodded then swiftly headed out of the camp to start her patrol.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Raven on Tue Feb 04, 2014 3:51 am

The young she cat walked up to misery awaiting for a command to be told. Seeing her walk off did she swifly follow behind.
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Post by SnakeHiss on Tue Feb 04, 2014 4:42 am

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Post by Battle on Tue Feb 04, 2014 6:46 am

Proudfire

Proudfire ducked out of the warriors den, the tom still exhausted although he had slept. He shook out his flame colored pelt and glanced to Pigeonfeather, smiling. When the flame-colored warrior caught sight of Miserycloud, he approached her, smiling. "Hopefully, you see no trouble," he meowed to her.


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A bi-colored black and white tom with long fur sat in the camp, watching everyone. Battlepaq shyly looked down at his paws and flicked his tail.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Tue Feb 04, 2014 8:30 pm

[quote="MiseryCloud"]
xxRyannexx1001 wrote:

(Sorry, but if u think about it pure's mother abandoned her half a moon ago, she taught herself how to hunt in her own way otherwise she would've starved to death a while ago. And she knows a bit on defending herself too because she's encountered a lot of rouges on her way to Sombreclans territory. Mentoring her will probably not take as long :3)

I'll give you credit for creativity, but the realism of this is wrong.
Your character is very young and not even 2 moons old. A kit which is two moons old would not be able to hunt nor fight. In fact, it is surprising she managed to find SombreClan in the first place, but, it isn't impossible if she was smart which she must be. The kit would have had to scavenge for food and/or hide if danger came lurking because of her age and inability to hunt successfully. Therefore your theory on cutting down her training time is incorrect and she will be trained the same time length as any apprentice. Luckily, though, with apprentices there is no training time limit, but, it usually takes 6 moons, so, cats are usually around 12 moons old when they become a warrior, but, they can become a warrior earlier or later, depending on when the leader feels they are ready to become a warrior. GBMP's aging system can be located in the Ultimate Warrior Cat Guide under "Roleplay Information" ^-^

yeah, shes a small kit not just because of her age but all together shes a lot smaller then kits her age, she found sombreclan when she was eves-dropping on a group of rouges talking about a clan across two rivers and a large moor, she thought maybe her mother was there, or that they would take her in because she was visibly underfed. She caught numbers of prey, but they were all either wounded, weak, or old and were easy targets for the small shekit. your right to say shes too young to be able to hunt and/or fight, but shes a lot smarter then normal kits after living on her own for half a moon relying only on herself and her senses. She didnt have the sense of saftey with a clan and was in constant fear and was always alert for danger. Her senses are sharper too even though they arent as good as a fully trained warrior. And i understand your completely right lol ^-^ but i didnt mean it would be quicker to train her i meant easier because she has a little basic skills already from watching rouges fight and hunting a little and learning from her unsuccessful hunts. Very Happy But i hear you and i sorreh for it, thats also why shes so weary of other cats too. The only reason she has trouble facing kits is because in each kit she sees she sees the faces of her siblings that were horrifically mauled to death in front of her by a savage fox. :3 but thanks for the info!

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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Flare on Tue Feb 04, 2014 9:38 pm

ViperPaw grinned in excitment as he heard his name called for patrols. He flicked his eyes towards Pure, curiosity twinkling in his blue eyes.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Tue Feb 04, 2014 9:49 pm

Looks at Viperpaw giving a friendly wave of my tail smiling.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Flare on Tue Feb 04, 2014 9:50 pm

"Hi!" He greeted openly, his outgoing personality kicking in. "I'm ViperPaw. You?"
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Tue Feb 04, 2014 9:56 pm

"Im Pure, nice to meet you Viperpaw" My enchanting icy blue gaze lighting up by the friendly apprentices comment.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Flare on Tue Feb 04, 2014 10:06 pm

"Nice to meet you too!" He grinned broadly. "You are new here, right?" He cocked his silver head slightly to the right.
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