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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:25 pm

The dark ginger tom ith his pale ocean blue eyes growled in deep rage as he spoke. His anger going to the roof as he spoke. Talonpaw looks at the rogue. His anger igniting when he saw where he was heading-'Don't go near here!!!"-he growled. Why was he feeling defensive now? He pounced towards him with extreme speed-

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Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:29 pm

The huge black and ivory colored tom twisted swiftly dodging Talonpaw's rage-filled attack. As he twisted he hooked a paw around one of Talonpaw's hind legs unbalancing him.
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Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:32 pm

Talonpaw landed with a thump as the hooked claw seemed to slice into his hind leg making a long shallow cut that made him that much angrier.-"I will not let you near my mother!!!"-he screeched as he does the one technique that never seemed to fail. He zoomed under his chest and pushed his broad right shoulder right towards his bulging neck vein. It wasn't deadly but it would hurt like a jaw around the throat-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:37 pm

Terror let out a grunt as the toms shoulder hit him, but he wasnt bleeding so he seemed all right. "Calm down Talonpaw, you will never win battles like that" he said as he gripped the toms scruff and pulled him away. It was obvious Terror wasnt taking the fight seriously.
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Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:41 pm

Talonpaw would then growl as his defense was very low compared to his attack and speed. Just from being hooked in the leg made his hind leg bleed. He growled-"Don't tell me how to win battles rouge..."-he growled as he pounced wincing from his leg and unsheathing his claws aiming for his shoulder-
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:45 pm

The Massive tom let out another sigh and sidestepped swiftly dodging and batting Talonpaw's flank as he went by. "See? Your too angry. Because i love Wishingfeather and she loves me huh? You didnt seem to care when you were calling her a disgrace" he growled and turned to swipe a huge paw and slam Talonpaw off his paws, Terror then attempted to pin Talonpaw.
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Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:49 pm

The ginger tom growled as the massive paw seemed to make him slam sideways pon his injured leg getting more dirt into the wound. Talonpaw listened to the massive tom as he spoke, tears stung his eyes for a moment and he used the tom's speed against him and bit into terror's shoulder as he was pinned-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:55 pm

The tom winced as blood began to trickle from his shoulder. The tom jumped off and turned to face Talonpaw, Terrors claws had been sheathed the whole battle. "Im sorry your upset ok? But Wishingfeather is happy, she wants a family. Yes your her family, and yes you make her happy. But you really hurt her Talonpaw, you need to understand that" he sighed.
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Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:59 pm

As the tom was pinned his chest was pushed inner by the toms weight and he screeched loudly and as the tom backed away he spat blood and blood trickled from the feline's mouth. Talonpaw sighed and looked down, whispering to himself-"She's not the disgrace. I am."
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:01 pm

Terror was off guard and glancing at his wounded shoulder. He lapped at it trying to stop the blood.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Feralclaw on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:04 pm

"Talonpaw, you have attacked a cat that meant no harm, i won't train you for half a moon because of that." he growled
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:09 pm

The apprentice backs away from the large tom. The realization's hit him in waves-"I'm a nobody. Not even a rogue. I'm a disgrace."-he spok to himself, his eyes wide open.-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:32 pm

Terror winced as he limped over to where Feralclaw's generally stood. He sat a bit away from the two toms and licked his deep wound. He got up and attempted to limp over to where Wishingfeather was again, wincing with each step.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Feralclaw on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:46 pm

"No, your just a mousebrain." he mewed trying to comfort his apprentice
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:49 pm

Talonpaw would smile lightly and offer a small smile-"I guess I am the rogue here."-he said softly glaning at where terror disappeared-"I might as well be called Talon instead of talonpaw."-he said softly-
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Post by Feralclaw on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:55 pm

"Calm down, go and hunt." he meowed to his apprentice
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:58 pm

"Sorry won't be able to cut it."-he said to his mentor andbowed his head before he padded out of the camp, towards the area for the hunts. To him it was a temporary exile-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Raven on Sat Apr 26, 2014 8:01 pm

Man I missed everything! xD poor Talon feels so bad.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat Apr 26, 2014 10:53 pm

(yeah, its so sad :CC Terror got hurt too DX)

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Post by Raven on Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:03 pm

A striped cat shoved her way into the Camp. She yawned before she looked back to see if her kit was following.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:45 pm

The dark ginger apprentice stares at the cats of the clearing as he enters the camp with a rabbit the size of himself-
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sun Apr 27, 2014 1:05 am

Terror bounded up to Wishingfeather and nuzzled her affectionatly "I havent seen Howlingstar yet" he meowed glancing around for the tabby gray tom. Hes seen Howlingstar before and knew what to expect.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Akauri on Sun Apr 27, 2014 2:28 am

Shadowpaw yawns quietly. She slowly blinks her eyes. She curls herself up. She licks her paws. Shadow looks up at the stars. She smiles and flicks her tail. Shadow enjoys the rest of the night.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by *Firefly* on Mon Apr 28, 2014 4:29 am

Rainpaw came out of the apprentice den. Her eyes looked tired and dreary, looking as if she hadn't slept for a day. She looked around, not sure if Talonpaw was in the den she just came out of or out in camp, or not in camp at all. Her ears tilted back in regret, she lowered her head and closed her eyes. She focused on listening to the birds singing, perking her ears up again. She intently listened to all the quiet sounds in the camp and in the trees above. She opened her eyes again, and began to gaze slowly around her once more. She glanced nearby to the entrance, and saw Talonpaw. Rainpaw walked up to him, tail swishing low to the ground. "U-Uhm.. Talonpaw?" She asked, her eyes wavering from him to her paws awkwardly.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by Talon on Mon Apr 28, 2014 5:15 pm

The tom cat set down his kill and looked att he she-cat. His eyes a pel bluish color.-"Rainpaw..."-he said in sadness as he had nearly fought his denmate.-"I must apologeize for m earlier actions as they were un called for and rude above anything else. I am truly sorry."-he said softly as he looked at her, his eyes filled with true sorrow-
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Post by PurekitandTerror on Mon Apr 28, 2014 8:22 pm

The large black and white tom turned to face the ginger apprentice his deep green eyes sincere. "I want to say that i forgive you too for your actions. And earlier today dawned on me, your a worthy opponent" his eyes were twinkling in amusment as he nudged Talonpaw in a playful manner. "Oh and my shoulder has started to feel a bit better, i hope i didnt injure your leg too badly" he turned to study where his claws accidently scored the apprentices back leg.
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Post by *Firefly* on Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:35 pm

Rainpaw looked surprised as Talonpaw spoke. Her eyes drifted away again. "I was coming to say that I was sorry.." She whispered, her voice full of guilt. "I yelled at you, and I shouldn't have. I-I felt so bad about it. I didn't mean to be so harsh..." She mewed quietly, her ears going slightly back.
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Post by Raven on Wed Apr 30, 2014 1:22 pm

A plump she cat walked out of the shadows. Looking around for her mate Terror.
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Post by *Firefly* on Wed Apr 30, 2014 1:33 pm

Rainpaw glanced to Terror and Wishingfeather. "He's over h-here, Wishingfeather.." She meowed, and then her eyes went back to Talonpaw. Staring into his eyes, she sighed sadly. "It's just.. it reminded me of my mother.." She said, and looked down at her paws again.
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Post by Talon on Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:40 pm

The apprentice turned his gaze to the older cat and he bowed his head-"I am glad that you are healing. Your mother?"-he said in a dense blockade of confusion as he looks right back into rainpaw's eyes. His own a pale bluish tint that was magnificent.-
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Post by *Firefly* on Thu May 01, 2014 3:24 am

"She was a warrior in this clan.. Tawnypelt... my father was a rogue, and he killed her.. I saw them bury her. I knew because she told me about my father a few days before she died.. I hope that he isn't an actual bad cat, and that he went to StarClan too." Rainpaw mewed, and strangely, she did not stutter. She looked up to the sky, lifting her silver head and her blue eyes to the stars that were hidden by days light, and slowly brought her head down again, exhaling slowly.
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Re: The Camp Entrance

Post by PurekitandTerror on Sat May 03, 2014 2:12 am

Terror found Wishinfeather and trotted over quickly to touch noses with her. "How are you doing?" he meowed brushing his cheek against hers. "I haven't seen Howlingstar, i don't know where he is currently. I hope we see him soon" he meowed as he glanced around.
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