Mist/Lilysplash

Name: Mist (About to be Lilysplash once she joins TempestClan)
Age (in moons, please): 13 Moons
Gender (Male / Female): Female
Description of character appearance: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
Mate, if any: None
Kit(s), if any: None.
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan): Soon to be TC.
Preferred rank (Past Present, Future. (?) means determinant.): Kit, Apprentice, Warrior (?), Medicine Cat (?), Rogue (?), Kittypet (?), Deputy (?), Leader (?), Elder, StarClan Cat (?), Dark Forest Cat (?).
History of character: (Optional) (I am lazy atm but I'll write a more detailed description in the char profiles sometime.) She got scraped by a burning branch through her exit in a fiery place. It cut and burned a moon shape on her forehead. She found a nearby tiny pond, and extinguished the flames. Ever since, she's had that moon mark where the fur never grew back. She met two TempestClan cats on patrol (or wherever they go outside of their camp, hunting etc.) and begged them to please help her with her burns. After that, they decide if she should join TempestClan.. or not.
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample):[/b]
Special code(s): What are those? Don't mind me if I sound retarded right now.
Extra(s):
Where you referred by someone? If so, who? Nope.

Hey, the picture is a little too big, some of it's cut off. I can't see all of it. It would've been cool to see the whole thing.  

But for the most part- it looks good! I did a quick skim through though, so I can't be sure.
It might be a good idea though, just to stick with the present tense. She isn't going to join TC right away, right? So she would start off as a loner/rouge, then become a warrior (since she is the right age for that, and the medicine cat spots have already been filled, sorry.) It might also be a good idea to PM the leader of TC: Flare (Whisperingstar) to get the all-clear for rping out the little plot idea that you have in Mist's history. c:

I'm not too sure about the moon mark though... maybe you should buy it as a special pelt marking in the admin store (In the point store topic) so you can get accepted by an admin or mod?

Yes, Fenris is right. The crescent shaped mark on her forehead would go under the unrealistic marking category, and therefore would need to be bought from the Admin store. So unless you want to go and buy that, I'm afraid you'll have to remove it from her appearance. Also, a description of the appearance is required, instead of just an image. You can leave the picture, but your own description is needed too, to ensure realism.

I'm also confused about the whole ranking thing with the question marks? It might be easier if you just choose the rank you want to her to have when she joins TempestClan, rather than listing past ranks, etc.

Please refrain from using foul language. There's no need for it.

The special code is a code located in the rules. It's for new users only.

What do you mean foul language?

And what do I need to purchase that? I'm new with the whole shop thing..

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Read the items.
See if you have enough. Then comment and say what you want and I'll be able to deduct the points from your account tomorrow afternoon my time.

Okay.

Also, what do you mean all the medicine cat spots have been filled? Frostpaw just left TC, I thought.

That must be a wanted position if Silverlight already has an apprentice.

You also need to describe her appearance with words too, instead of just using an image, so we know that it's realistic. Because as well as that, the image shows a creamy coloured cat with blue eyes which is unrealistic, since a cat needs a considerable amount of white in their pelt to have blue eyes.

And if you go check out the member lists for each clan, that might help too. ^^

Not exactly, Bluestar *from the books* had a solid light gray coat color with blue eyes so i dont think she needs white in her pelt :3 but yeah you need a description with words in order to be realistic

She had blue eyes. Not grey.
I am unsure about that, actually, because according to genetics (realistic cat genetics) there are no blue eye combinations possible for that "blue grey" coat color. Blue eyes are only possible in regards to white spotting, and this is going by realistic cat genetics. Usual, huh? Purebreds such as persians, ragdolls and such can have blue eyes.

I wasn't aware TC already had a medicine cat apprentice. But, the reason your characters were removed from the ranks were mainly because you simply weren't cutting the activity required.

Yeah i was just saying that because ive seen cats that had no white in their coats have blue eyes. But i dont like arguing so its up 2 you :3

I've never seen a cat in RL, according to the books, yes, but, not real life cat genetics.

Of course there are exceptions. But, they don't arise often.

Yeap. Look on google for any colored cat with blue eyes and u would find it. I saw an all black cat with blue eyes, an all ginger cat with blue eyes (weird right?) and an all silver cat with blue eyes (silverstream had those) and people are saying her picture is cut off, well it is but all you have to do is click on the picture and it will show you the full version

PureandTerror wrote:Yeap. Look on google for any colored cat with blue eyes and u would find it. I saw an all black cat with blue eyes, an all ginger cat with blue eyes (weird right?) and an all silver cat with blue eyes (silverstream had those) and people are saying her picture is cut off, well it is but all you have to do is click on the picture and it will show you the full version

Heheh. It's called Photoshop or purebreds. My dp has blue eyes. And that's a purebred. xD

XD thats true, blue eyes are a bit rare on a solid colored cat. I wuz just saying there are a lot of charries in the book with blue eyes that are all gray or all black *breezepelt* but thats the book thats not real genetics *im getting good at being realistic just by being near you Misery XD*

Heheh. Yeah, I'm not sure much about the books and the realism. But, there are exceptions to the blue eyes rule and white spotting. ^-^ But, even that can be a bit too complex for my understanding haha. Nightmare is the expert with the genetics.

I never officially met Nightmare.... Huh.... How do you put pictures in ur signiture?

Same way you can upload images to the forum.

The first button bellow the "B" for "Bold"

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Upload your image, simply by following the steps. It's rather easy to use. Or if you have a link which goes to a direct image, like this; [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] - You can use image tags.

Code:

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Thanks a ton!

Once rank and description is clarified, then the character can be approved.
However, I'm not sure which characters are currently being roleplayed, so, I'm unsure how much space remains on this account. I suggest you have a think and let me know which characters, Firey.