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Post by Raven on Tue Mar 04, 2014 5:20 pm

one day  a caln cat for SC come's to find Hawk (silents dad). They take him back to the clan and he takes a name. as he stays he watches silent and one day silent gathers curage to ask whats his problem. he replys and says when your alone I will be sure to find a way to end your pitty life like your mother and brother and sister. at this time hopefully he's an apprentice for a bit and goes hunting by the thunderpath. Hawk sees his chance and spooks the hare silent was trying to get. silent was to focused to notice the thunderpath and ran onto it killing the hare. but right after that a monster comes and si runs he just gets hit and his leg gets twisted and hawk leaves him to die. a patrol comes and finds him and saves his life but it looks like he wont be able to be a warrior.... thats if the medicine cat apprentice is open. the clan ask's what happened and silent replys it was his daddy the clan does not beileave him and so on then one day hawk trys killing him again and stuff goes down :Pthats all i have so far...
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Post by MiseryCloud on Thu Mar 06, 2014 1:46 am

You do mean VC, right? xD
And by "comes to find" you mean, he's randomly discovered there, on the territory? Could be a bit weird if a patrol of VC cats went to go and find a random rogue? xDD Heheh. I love the plot!
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Post by Raven on Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:02 am

yea i mean VC But Hawkys not the one to go by rules D: So since of that I thought he could be hunting and stuff and a potrole finds him or he could be at the pale river of VC and rouge lands
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Post by MiseryCloud on Thu Mar 06, 2014 8:46 pm

Oohh, nice :3
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Re: Hawks revenge

Post by Raven on Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:04 pm

yup Razz
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