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Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 10:52 pm

The golden maine coon watches the sunset from a small hill a little ways away. He turns back to the Sombreclan territory. His light celadon eyes show nothing, nothing. They just show the reflection of the moon and the light reflection itself. He takes a deep breathe and pads with huge steps toward the sunset and he glances behind him. A unknown presence hit his scent tracer. He sighs and hangs his head low before speaking a deep and older voice.-"What are you doing here?"-he say softly without turning to the figure. The scent was clear to him. From the clans, he didn't know who the cat was without turning but he smelt clan all over the cat. He turns and he stays in his stood up posture, his shoulder healed but slumped.-
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:00 pm

The grey leader was walking the sacred path to the moonstone. Her hard, emerald eyes fixed on the ground in front of her paws. The scent of another cat picked her head up and she looked over to Blaze. She narrowed her eyes as her long grey fur was whipped by the wind.
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:03 pm

The once loved golden long-furred maine coon warrior looks at the leader of tempestclan. He recognized her from the gatherings-"Whisperingstar...."-he says softly under his breath before he bows his head in deep respect. The golden warrior hadlight celadon eyes that were so sweet and tender. On his shoulder was a hidden scar that made his shoulder slump. He smiles lightly-
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:06 pm

Alright, Im gonna assume that Whispery doesn't know he was exiled.

WhisperingStar's frown increased. "Aren't.... Aren't you a SombreClan warrior? What are you doing out here this far from your territroy?" She mewoed, ignoring his kindess, her mew turning slightly hostile.
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:09 pm

The golden rogue stares at her. She was gorgous, he couldn't help but stay soft. His tone changes to a moderate deep and wise tone. He leans his head u from the bow and responds without hostility-"I was exiled."-he said softly to her before turning back to the sunset-"I came to find the moonstone."-he said softly, looking towards the sunset-
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:17 pm

The she cat wrinkled her nose, cocking a grey ear at his soft voice. She took a deep breath, eyes still narrowed. "Well. I suggest moving off of sacred territory, I believe HowlingStar wouldn't want you here." She flicked her fluffy tail. "What is your bussiness here, anyways?" He green eyes were sharp as she gazed at him impatiently.
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:21 pm

Blaze turned his light celadon gaze to her. This huge cat was a soft little moss ball but he was fierce when he needed to be. He licks his paw and brings it over his ear, his eyes turn to the sunset.-"I came here for answers. As for Howlingstar..."-he takes a deep breath then looks at her-"I don't follow his words anymore."-he says looking at her ear flick made him curious. He had one other problem-"The only problem is... I don't know how to find the moonstone."
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:26 pm

WhisperingStar glared at BlazeHeart. "Look. You are a rogue, you dont need contact with StarClan. They wont answer you. You may try all you like, but it is pointless," She lashed her long, grey tail and turned around. "If you must... Follow me."
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:30 pm

The golden cat looks at her and he nods softly to the grey warrior. The rogue comment ruffled his fur but he stayed calm. He padded close to her, it didn't bother him very much, he was cold so he got so close that their pelts brushed. he shivered and continued to walk-"I might be a rogue but I am still a beliver in starclan. I pray to them every sunset whisperingstar"
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:36 pm

She glanced at him and her pelt, and  to moved foward so she was in front, raising her grey head tall, flicking her tail, not caring if it might hit him in the face. "Mm. From what I know, StarClan does not talk to the exiled." She meowed matter-of-factly as she paused to look at te branching off tunnels and choosing the one to her right with confidence, her long, grey, fur slowly fading with the light.


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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:39 pm

The maine coon warrior simply let her and moved his head making her tail miss his muzzle. he followed her with soft but large steps. he was freezing to death even for his long fur. He kept his light celadon gaze on her and he followed her, his gaze watching he light now.-
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:41 pm

WhisperingStar looked back at him, feeling just an inkling of pity, but she turned back and she soon emerged into a large, beautiful, moonlit cavern, with a giant, "glowing" rock in the middle. "Alright. Here we are." She meowed to Blaze. "If you wish to contact StarClan, touch your nose to the stone."
The leader did as she said, lying down on the cold floor, touching her nose to the cold rock, her breathing growing softer.
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:44 pm

The golden huge maine coon once loved warrior's mouth agaped at the beauty that he saw. To him it was legendary that he would be able to visit the moonstone. he nodded to her and rested his nose agaist the stone that was right beside her. He almly fell into a deep sleep. His breathing soft-
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Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:50 pm

WhisperingStar stayed there for a while, her dreams peaceful. She conversed with StarClan about her troubles with the fox and poor hunting, but nothing much exciting happened. She slowly stirred and woke to the cold. She stretched and gave a yawn, attempting to groom her fur a little bit.
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Post by Talon on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:55 pm

Blaze stayed where he was for a few more minutes longer then she did. His dreams were peaceful, his questions answered. His shoulder looked the same but instead of it bending like it was when he walked in, it was straightened when he awoke. Yawning loudly, he looked at her-"Do you need help?"-he says padding over and lightly licking her pelt in a sharing tongues sort of matter.-
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Post by Flare on Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:59 pm

WhisperingStar stopped her grooming to look over at Blaze, thouroughly confused. She nearly jerked away, but forced herself to stay where she was. "Your questions were answered?" The leader asked hesitantly , looking at him, standing, getting ready to walk out of the cavern.
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Post by Talon on Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:03 am

The warrior nods, his celadon eyes land on her gaze for a few moment and he stays silent. He licks her behind the ears sharing tongues softly. He looks at her having to bend down slightly with his neck-
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Post by Flare on Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:06 am

"Cold, isn't it?" The leader meowed padding forward, feeling uncomfortable. She began to walk down the corridors as heat flooded her pelt. "It"s best that we be getting out of here or we will catch something."
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Post by Talon on Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:09 am

The warrior nods lightly, he sighs and pads after her getting beside her but a little ways to the side not wanting to intrude again. he felt freezing, his shoulder was straightened now. He knew it but didn't think she did, starclan's work. He knew who he was now. He waited till they exited the tunnels and he smiles stopping-"I am Blazeheart."
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Post by Flare on Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:19 am

"I am WhisperingStar, as you know." The leader looked over to him, her guard was never let down. "Glad I could help, BlazeHeart. May StarClan guide you."

If you want Blazeh to join TC, lets wait until Howly PM's meh back for his opinion.
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Post by Talon on Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:23 am

Blazeheart nods lightly and looks at her-"I was going to ask you something but..."-he stays silent as he continues to walk beside her. he looks at her and then takes a deep breath-"Your guard makes m think you don't trust me. I wish to join Tempestclan. Your decision can be handed to me when you feel the need to give it to me."-he walked past her and into the woods. Turning back to glance at her-
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by HowlingStar on Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:58 am

(Just marked this as plot drama and private so you don't get random medicine cats and such wandering in! :3 Continue!)
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Re: Blaze's Journey (PRIVATE - Mini Char Plot)

Post by Flare on Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:18 am

WhisperingStar paused, looking over to BlazeHeart.  She studied him with her emerald eyes and after what seemed like forever, the grey leader spoke again slowly. "Well. TempestClan does need fresh, motivated warriors now. You definitely seem motivated and willing to help... I feel you could deserve a second chance."
WhisperingStar took a deep breath and continued "And HowlingStar has never quite gotten his judgement with his clan right..." She snorted, rolling her eyes slightly. She looked up and dipped her head to the tom, and turned to her territory, flicking her tail. "Come along, BlazeHeart."
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Post by Talon on Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:54 pm

Blazespirit now.)

The golden pelted long furred tom nodded to the leader. He smiles but then his gae turns serious again. He had forgotten something, he pads to face her and he sighs-"I also have a niece who went with me as we were banished. I've always been by her side Whisperingstar. All she knows is clan life. She loves herbs as well, I heard talk that you need a Medicine cat Apprentice?"-he said softly, he wasn't going to leave behind his family.-"If you want to talk to her, follow me."-he says pointing his tail in the direction of the grassy plains.-

Grassy plaines. Russet's Den)
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Post by Flare on Sat Mar 15, 2014 5:53 pm

"We are looking for one.." The leader looked thought about it. "Sure. Let me meet her." She turned around and flicked her tail towards him to signal he should lead.
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Post by Talon on Sat Mar 15, 2014 6:06 pm

The golden warrior nodded and jumped over a small hill with grace as he headed down to his home. Where, his brother anyway-

Ill post first in russets den then you post after.)
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Post by Flare on Sat Mar 15, 2014 6:08 pm

Kk :3
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