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owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Thousand on Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:31 am

Name: Owlflight
Age (in moons, please): 23
Gender (Male / Female): Male
Description of character appearance: Owlflight isn't really the type of cat to stand out. Average height, average pelt color - his looks are hardly unique. He's a very plain grey tabby with light hazel, always excited eyes and black at the very tips of his paws. His fur is incredibly short and scruffy, and somehow always manages to get messy.
Mate, if any: None
Kit(s), if any: None
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan: Valiantclan
Preferred rank: Warrior
History of character (Optional)
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample): The mouse was practically under his paws.

Owlflight watched his prey as quietly as ever, waiting for the right moment. Trying to remember everything, he made sure to still any small movement, to prepare to jump at the field mouse.

Owlflight waited until he could wait no longer, then sprang towards the unsuspecting creature. To his dismay, it saw him coming with a squeak of terror and fled into the bushes.

"Mousedung." the tabby hissed under his breath. This was going to be a long day. Still, he was alone, and that was a huge relief. As much as he'd tried to get used to being in a Clan, it still wasn't the same as the life of a loner.

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Last edited by Thousand on Tue Mar 11, 2014 5:02 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Re: owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Alue on Tue Mar 11, 2014 4:00 am

I'm not particularly sure about the realism around the name, "ThousandReasons," as it isn't a proper warrior cat name. If you get what I mean. Razz Usually the names consist of either an adjective or the name of something nature-related. Or, a personality trait.
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Re: owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Thousand on Tue Mar 11, 2014 4:09 am

Ok. I changed his name!
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Re: owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Alue on Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:25 pm

Sorry to have to do this again to you. xD But 'parrot' still doesn't meet the realism standards, because it's extremely unlikely that a warrior cat would come across a parrot in the wild, since the books were based in the UK.
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Re: owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Thousand on Tue Mar 11, 2014 5:02 pm

It's ok! I changed it again.
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Re: owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Alue on Tue Mar 11, 2014 7:09 pm

Welcome to GBMP! Very Happy

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Re: owlflight- valiantclan

Post by Thousand on Tue Mar 11, 2014 7:15 pm

Thanks!
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