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Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 3:54 am

b]Name:[/b] RustScrape
Age (in moons, please): 34 moons
Gender (Male / Female): Male
Description of character appearance: Tiger-like (He's a toyger) , black eyes, big.
Mate, if any:
Kit(s), if any:
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan:
Preferred rank: Loner.
History of character (Optional) Old leader from another clan, another forest, exiled.
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample):[/b]
A tiger-striped tom limp-runs through the rain, his eyes bloodshot and tired, his paws cracked, and his fur soaked. Seeing a tree nearby, he shuffles under it and falls, whimpering, to the ground.
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Re: I'm new

Post by HowlingStar on Mon Mar 31, 2014 5:43 am

Welcome to GBMP! There's just a few things we'll need to fix up on your form, unfortunately, but, once they're fixed, we can start roleplaying!

Rust is that deep brownish red color which you get on metal. Cats don't really have a lot of expsure to metal and so they wouldn't know what rust is. But, they would know what russet is. Russet is a color, a gingery rust color, basically. Just alter your name to meet the realism standards. We base our Roleplay on Erin Hunter's books, so, we play in accordance to that. I like the name Russet and you can use that if you prefer? RussetScrape? Or, if not, you could look through this list and find another which you like better? : [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] (there's a naming section if you scroll down)

Toyger? I'm not too sure what this is...Is it like slang? Do you mean a deep gingery brown tabby with black stripes? If so, could you describe the appearance as a gingery brown tabby instead of just "Toyger". I also can't accept black eyes. Cats can't have black eyes. They can have a deep chocolate brown if that's what you were meaning? Deep brown could almosst look black?

Unfortunately, I'm not going to accept the history. I will, however, allow for him to be a past deputy. But, not a past leader. Leaders usually have lives and the suffix "Star" which your character does not have. If I allow everyone to have a past leader character, then.. We may have multiple cats running around with 5 lives and 9 lives and such. But, deputy would be fine.

Thanks!! Sorry, I hope it's not toooo much for you. Razz
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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:12 pm

Can he have blue eyes?
Thanks, if you want to know what a toyger is you can go here: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
I liked Rust because it relates to his looks, but would I be able to use any of the prefixes: Amber, Flame (Dawn?) or Gold?
Could he have already lost his lives, or never gotten them (Because they didn't accept him as leader; didn't let him go to receive them)?
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Re: I'm new

Post by .Quiet. on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:15 pm

From what I've seen....Toyger is a breed of cat, and I believe that this trait needs to be bought in the admin store. Smile

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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:22 pm

Question  Okay, just some quick questions:
Which one is it?
and how do you get points?
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Re: I'm new

Post by .Quiet. on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:24 pm

I don't quite get your first question, but for the second one, you get points by posting. :)You can view the amount of points you currently have under your avatar/pic/whatever it's called. Wink

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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:27 pm

Okay. Which thing in the admin store would I need to buy?
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Re: I'm new

Post by .Quiet. on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:29 pm

It's called "Pure-bred Cats" and you can find the Admin Store at this link: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:33 pm

O~O Too much... Any way I can make him look like that without being one?
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Re: I'm new

Post by .Quiet. on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:36 pm

That I'm not quite sure, you'll probably need to ask a mod or admin about that. Smile I've recently returned to rping on this site and need to catch up.

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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:39 pm

Okay, thanks.
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Re: I'm new

Post by .Quiet. on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:40 pm

You're welcome, glad to help!

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Re: I'm new

Post by MiseryCloud on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:40 pm

No. But, you can make him a regular tabby cat, BehindTheStripes. ^-^ We don't allow users to make their character look like a purebred cat as it's defeats the purpose of actually buying the purebred. Plus, to look identical to a purebred cat would be rather rare, if not uncommon or impossible.

You can have blue eyes on GBMP. We allow this on here since the genetics behind it can be a little too complex. So, blue eyes is acceptable.

HowlingStar has already said that your character can't be a previous leader, but, a previous deputy is acceptable. Smile

And don't worry - earning points on GBMP is very easy and quick to get. Just post a lot once you're approved and you'll be fine. Very Happy Nice to meet you, by the way!!

Btw, thanks Quiet for helping out. Smile
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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:53 pm

Okay. Tabbies can be brown right?  Twisted Evil 
Sorry if I'm being difficult, I just kinda have my character built on another site already and want to stick to it as much s possible Wink
What about the name bit?
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Re: I'm new

Post by MiseryCloud on Mon Mar 31, 2014 9:01 pm

Yup! Brown tabbies are finnnee!

& It's okay, I totally understand!

BehindTheStripes wrote:would I be able to use any of the prefixes: Amber, Flame (Dawn?) or Gold?

Amber, Flame, Dawn are all fine! And so is golden. But, I wouldn't say Gold. I've never seen the word Gold used in cat names. But, Golden is fine, same with the other names you listed above. Smile
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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Mon Mar 31, 2014 9:04 pm

Okay, should I re-post the form here? (Changed, obviously.)
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Re: I'm new

Post by Resolute on Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:42 am

A admin should be online soon to check over it and approve you. Or Mod. Smile
I'm Res, by the way! Welcome!! Smile
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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:55 am

Thanks, Res! Here's my fixed form for when an admin does get on:

Name: AmberScrape
Age (in moons, please): 34 moons
Gender (Male / Female): Male
Description of character appearance: Large brown tabby cat with dark stripes, blue eyes.
Preferred rank: Loner.
History of character (Optional) Old deputy from another clan, another forest, exiled.
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample):[/b]
A tiger-striped tom limp-runs through the rain, his eyes bloodshot and tired, his paws cracked, and his fur soaked. Seeing a tree nearby, he shuffles under it and falls, whimpering, to the ground.
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Re: I'm new

Post by HowlingStar on Tue Apr 01, 2014 3:27 am

Thanks for the fix up! Smile



You can now start posting and roleplaying on the forum!!!
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Re: I'm new

Post by BehindTheStripes on Tue Apr 01, 2014 3:30 am

Thank you!!
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Re: I'm new

Post by HowlingStar on Tue Apr 01, 2014 3:38 am

ANYTIME Smile
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