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Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:26 pm

Name: Shokubutsu (Shok)
Age: 2 Years
Gender: Female
Description of Character Appearance: A jet black femme with white blended into her muzzle, chest, undertail, and completely white legs up to her shoulders. She has fierce, determined amber eyes.
Breed: Mexican Wolf
Mate: None
Pups: None
I wish to join Wakashi Pack
Rank: Scout


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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by Alue on Sat Apr 05, 2014 7:18 am

I'm not particularly sure about the jagged stripes down her back, as that'd most likely count as an unusual pelt marking which you'd need to purchase from the Admin Store. So either change it or go purchase that, if you have enough points, otherwise I can't approve this charrie, sorry. ^^
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Sat Apr 05, 2014 1:05 pm

I edited Alue! (It's HornetFade)
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by Alue on Sat Apr 05, 2014 1:39 pm

Still .. wolves don't generally have stripes. Razz I don't see much of a difference to her appearance.

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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Sat Apr 05, 2014 2:04 pm

Is that better?
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by HowlingStar on Sat Apr 05, 2014 7:44 pm

I'm not sure what an Urban wolf is. O_O Please select a breed off the accepted wolf breed list. Wolves also don't tend to have large destinctive spots. In fact, I've never seen a spotted wolf. May I suggest a blended fur color? So, jet black with white blends under her muzzle or something Like this; [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Sat Apr 05, 2014 7:45 pm

WHEEEEYY YOU FOUND OUT!!!! I was gonna keep it a surprise for ya. I check out the wolf breed list now.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by Alue on Sun Apr 06, 2014 3:43 am

Okay, well now the breed is fine, but maned wolves have blended fur colours as Howly said, not spots. xD Sorry about all this.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Sun Apr 06, 2014 4:50 am

Sorry, I was away, couldn't finish. Sorry for all the hassle I'm causing, I'll fix it now.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by Raven on Sun Apr 06, 2014 2:01 pm

WHAAT its Hornetfade? Dang I will be honest I did NOT see that coming Razz
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Post by WingedFlight on Sun Apr 06, 2014 2:03 pm

Lol Raven! U so cutesy when you confused! xD
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by Raven on Sun Apr 06, 2014 2:08 pm

Me cute? I don't know what chu talken 'bout. Haha. I try so hard Razz (not really) xDD How have you been?
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Sun Apr 06, 2014 2:09 pm

I'm fine, just been away for a while. How are you?
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Post by Raven on Sun Apr 06, 2014 3:02 pm

Recovering from a head injury. Terrible. Im behind in school from it... its hard doing work with it so I guess im failing some classes... Oh well Most of the year I had A's or B's so I think im good.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Sun Apr 06, 2014 3:03 pm

OUCH.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by MiseryCloud on Sun Apr 06, 2014 6:49 pm

I'm confused. You said you checked out the list. But. Maned wolves are not on the accepted wolf breeds list and you can't get jet black maned wolves.. Maned wolves look like foxes. Razz

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Please read the actual wolf breed list.
To match your wolf with the appearance, I'd say she's either a; grey wolf, tundra wolf, or mexican wolf.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by WingedFlight on Mon Apr 07, 2014 2:59 am

Fixed.
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Re: Shokubutsu of Wakashi Pack

Post by Alue on Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:48 pm

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