Plot for Thornpaw

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Plot for Thornpaw

Post by Smokeclaw and Thornpaw on Sun Apr 06, 2014 5:03 pm

Hi i was woundering if thornpaw could get kiddnapped and there would be a prophocy of him and three other cats that have to find him and then they go on a life or death journy to an known land"
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Re: Plot for Thornpaw

Post by MiseryCloud on Sun Apr 06, 2014 6:43 pm

This has been moved to mini-character-plots.

Um. I'm not really sure how this comes into a forum plot. So, it is a mini-character plot. Hence why it's been moved. However, if you're meaning, you want all the clans to be involved - I'd have to automatically deny your request since we currently have a forum plot in the making and it doesn't make sense for four clans to search for 1 cat.

You also need to be a bit more specific.

Who kidnaps him? He can't just magically get kidnapped. Why did they kidnap him? Where are they taking him?

Who are the three cats? Rogues? Kittypets? ValiantClan warriors? Who?

What is the unknown land? Many clans could be determined "unknown" depending on the cat and their rank. So, clan cats that have been in the clans their whole life won't be familiar with the meadows which is rogue territory.

I feel that there is a lot you haven't thought about. These plots which are somewhat in depth should be carefully thought about and considered. Not randomly smacked together.
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