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A Partially Warrior Cat Related Poem (To Be Deleted)

Post by Leafheart on Sat Nov 16, 2013 7:15 pm

This is a fictional poem I wrote. It's not really related to anything on this site, but I think someone will enjoy it. It's loosely based off of Sandcloud and her sister Berry
Together
Two different worlds, two different lives...
Two different sides
Combined to form one
The life of a loner
And the life of a Clan cat
Two sisters, two lives
Always Stronger
Together
We never stand alone
No matter what, we’ll always stay together
Two sisters, two views
One spirit we form
Two halves of one whole
Together, we stand strong
We challenge all evil
We defend all light
We will never give up
On each other
Two sisters, one heart
Always there for each other
Through the darkest hour
And through the best of days
We will always stick together
No matter what we do...



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Post by MiseryCloud on Mon Nov 18, 2013 12:14 am

Oohh. Smile Good stuff!
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Post by Magpie on Mon Nov 18, 2013 8:20 pm

Not bad. ^^ The composition itself is good, but I don't see much emotion coming through. Neutral Good start, though!
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Re: A Partially Warrior Cat Related Poem (To Be Deleted)

Post by Pigeon on Mon Nov 25, 2013 9:57 pm

It's pretty. Smile
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Re: A Partially Warrior Cat Related Poem (To Be Deleted)

Post by Guest on Thu Nov 28, 2013 8:37 pm

It almost sounds as if it were/could be, a prophecy.

But it still is pretty awesome. ^-^
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Post by MiseryCloud on Fri Nov 29, 2013 11:19 pm

It is really pretty, Smile
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