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Fire Emblem: "The Raid"

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Post by Feralclaw Wed Nov 06, 2013 10:36 pm

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Sothe Looked down at the enemey castle thinking This should be easy. he looked to his second in command, Ike, A bulky warrior with his specialy made sword, Ragnell. He looked at his Dagger, Athen and thought to him self He's lucky im here that broadsword is the going to be the death of him... He called to his small raiding squad which consited of, Shionon, A master archer with a special bow that holds two arrows at once with a lower draw-weight, useful for sneak attacks or to distract a mounted knight charging. The other string has a higher draw-weight more powerful then the other string. Gratie a knight using a special lance named,Varu. Mist, An herbalist by heart and has learned how to use the sword in quick movements. Nepenee, A sentinal wielding a small shield and a powerful javilen named,WishBlade He looked down and saw a noble girl with silver hair in a red preist robe rode out and He called out "Lets get going while the noble woman is riding out!

Chapter 1
"Ike! Go get some herbs from Mist pass them out, That noble woman looks like she's heavily defended. wheres Soren? we need that dang mage!" He called out "Yes sir, Im on it Sothe" Ike said "Shinion get some armor peircing arrows from the vendors! Gratie stop trying to impress the vendor girls! We're going into battle!" Worthless laguz dung is what Gratie is... "Sir, Mist is out of herbs sir!" Ike called "Fine bring these people with us, Shinion,Soren, and Gratie!" Sothe called out Peering down the cliff he saw the noble woman healing a wounded child shot with an Imperial arrow. The Legion is getting blood thirsty "Lets go while she's bu-" Feeling a sharp pain in his side he looked down and saw Ragnell in his side and instantly knew, Ike was an Imperial Var'er tumbleing down the hill side side covered in blood he landed at the feet of the noble woman. Turning back to see if anyone noticed he saw Mist running down the main rading party behind her she saw that it could have been a fatal wound. He was in the hands of Yune, The Goddess of life. He looked back up and saw the noble woman whispering somthing in Laguz. Just before he was in the cold embrace of death he felt the pain in his side stop and heard the noble woman say, "My name is Michaiah Preistest of Crimeia"

more in the future Very Happy
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Post by HowlingStar Wed Nov 06, 2013 11:19 pm

Nice. :3
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Post by Aurora Thu Nov 07, 2013 5:47 pm

That's cool! Nice names too :3
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Post by Feralclaw Thu Nov 07, 2013 9:37 pm

Thx got them from my two favorite games Very Happy fire emblem path of radiance and fire emblem radiant dawn Very Happy
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Post by Guest Thu Nov 07, 2013 10:11 pm

Nice story so far! ^^
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Post by Duckshine Fri Nov 08, 2013 8:10 pm

I really like the names~
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Post by Feralclaw Fri Nov 08, 2013 11:33 pm

thank you i hope i can find out what to do for chapter 2 :/
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Post by MiseryCloud Sat Nov 09, 2013 1:13 am

Keep up the good work!! Very Happy
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Post by Gumdrop Sat Nov 09, 2013 5:06 am

Ohh. :3
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Post by Leafheart Sat Nov 09, 2013 4:05 pm

Cool
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 09, 2013 4:15 pm

Pretty Good Keep It Up Very Happy
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Post by Feralclaw Thu Nov 21, 2013 11:17 pm

i have like HALF of chapter 2 so far >.<
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Post by MiseryCloud Fri Nov 22, 2013 3:59 am

Oohhh, niccee. Keep working at it. Smile
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