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Post by Zephyr Tue Dec 03, 2013 12:02 am

Name: Sunflame
Gender: Male
Age: 18 Moons Old
Description of eye color and pelt: Dark brown shorthair, redish brown paws, ears, tail and underbelly, forest green eyes
Mate: -
Kit(s): -
Preferred Clan/Loner/Kitty-pet: Valiantclan
What rank do you want?: Warrior
RP Style: Sunflame started sprinting as his quiet walk through the hunting grounds turned to a mad dash race to the finish line, he ran rapidly and jumped over any bypassing twigs or rocks. He finally got his catch. It was a little mouse, tiny but delicious. Yes, I'm glad I decided to hunt. He thought through satisfied mouthfuls of prey.
Extra(s): Sunflame got his name because he was born in the horribly hot rays of the sun from green-leaf.


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Sunflame Left_bar_bleue2/5Sunflame Empty_bar_bleue  (2/5)
Health Bar:
Sunflame Left_bar_bleue100/100Sunflame Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Character Mood:: Hmm, what is this?

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Post by HowlingStar Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:53 am

Indigo = Purply blue color.
Purply = Not accepted. Razz

Change eye color, please.

Also, that specific description of cat cannot have blue eyes. xD
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Sunflame Left_bar_bleue90/100Sunflame Empty_bar_bleue  (90/100)
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Post by Zephyr Tue Dec 03, 2013 9:48 am

Ok, I changed it.
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Sunflame Left_bar_bleue2/5Sunflame Empty_bar_bleue  (2/5)
Health Bar:
Sunflame Left_bar_bleue100/100Sunflame Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Character Mood:: Hmm, what is this?

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Post by Fenris Tue Dec 03, 2013 2:11 pm

Red paws...? Do you mean something like a brown-ish type color? You might want to change that a little to explain what you mean. Smile

The Term would be socks, and from what I know, a cat's socks usually come in three colors...

Black

White

and brown. (be it a dark or lighter brown)

I have never heard of a cat with 'red' paws before. I even looked it up and have come up with nothing. Unless the cat is somehow injuried (and has swollen red paws, or a giant rash). Razz

Can you please change that or explain?

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Post by HowlingStar Tue Dec 03, 2013 8:03 pm

Ooohhh. Nice, Feny. :3
Actually, reading over that a second time, I did pick up on that too. First time through, I didn't notice it very much but now I do.

Cats who are both red and brown appear to be mostly mottled, tabbies or just straight all brown or all russety red. With the exception of the Abyssinian cat which has a ticked red and brown pelt. xD (Fur that is basically blended and banded together)


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Health Bar:
Sunflame Left_bar_bleue90/100Sunflame Empty_bar_bleue  (90/100)
Character Mood:: Hhhmm..

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Post by Alphess Aiyana Fri Dec 13, 2013 3:58 am

"Reddish brown" so.. Like deep brown?

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