Smokeclaw of. SombreClan

Name:  Smokeclaw
Age (in moons, please):12moons
Gender (Male / Female): female
Description of character appearance: he has a silver fur and amber eyes.
Mate, if any:none but want one
Kit(s), if any: none but want one
SombreClan
Preferred rank: warrior
History of character (Optional) will find out in rp
RP Style [/b] Smokeclaw felt the warm of the sun on his fur. He opened his drippy eyes and yawned. he got up and groomed his messed up fur. After ten minutes he was done and got up, he slowly started to walk out of the warriors den and looked around the camp.
Special code(s): Loyalty is what matters.
Extra(s): want to be deputy or leader one day
Where you referred by someone? If so, who? no.

Hey, welcome to GBMP! I'm Alue- a moderator.

Okay, well, first of all, the sign-up form example does state an in-depth sample is required. It doesn't have to be a ginormous paragraph, but two small sentences doesn't really give us an idea of how you roleplay.

Also, you're missing something very important- please go re-read the rules.

And, you've posted this in the incorrect section, but don't worry, I've moved it.

Ok thank you I am new here

You still need to take the points I made into account and edit your form before I can approve you. x3

Ok I edited it.

Okay, now... I have some points which I need to make. I know, I know, a lot to do. But, it shouldn't take too long.

➨ Solid silver cats cannot have icy blue eyes. It is impossible as blue is is not common in standard colored cats. Cats have to have a certain amount of whitespotting for the eye color trait to be possible. So, you will need to alter your eye color. Amber, golden yellow, hazel, pale green, they're all acceptable.

➨ In the template, it clearly stated that you cannot apply for deputy nor leaderships ranks.

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Plus, SombreClan already has both a leader and deputy. If you wish to gain a highrank, you will have to be a warrior first and then selected by the leader, as it would happen in the book series.
This means you will need to alter your rank to "warrior".

Once you have made the appearance and rank adjustment, you should be ready for approval. Nice to meet you by the way and welcome to the forum!!

I know that why she is a warrior. I edit again.

Also, try to remember your terms.

Minute is not a realistic warrior cat term. They use the skies to tell time.

Day - "Sunrise"

Tomorrow - "Next sunrise" etc. There is a guide in the roleplay information section if you forget.

Come join us in the chatbox! It's at the bottom of the home page.

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