StoneKit

by **Shinoma** Sun Feb 16, 2014 11:30 pm

Name: StoneKit
Age (in moons, please): 6 moons
Gender (Male / Female): Female
Description of character appearance: A black and silver tabby. she has gold colored eyes
Mate, if any:N/A
Kit(s), if any: N/A
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan: TempestClan
Preferred rank: Apprentice

by **Alue** Mon Feb 17, 2014 5:14 am

Sorry, but you'll need to change the name, as it isn't very realistic.

'a precious stone, typically colourless, yellow, or pale blue, consisting of an aluminium silicate that contains fluorine.'

So I somehow doubt cats would have access to precious stones and gems. ^^'

Also, it isn't possible for a cat to have blue eyes unless they have a considerable amount of white fur. Kittens do have blue eyes when they're first born, but they almost always change after about a month. :3

And she can't be a warrior because she's only six moons old.

by **MiseryCloud** Mon Feb 17, 2014 5:59 am

HowlingStar wrote:Warrior - a cat trained in the ways of combat; warriors defend, hunt for, and fight for their Clan. There is no actual age to be named a warrior, however, they are usually made a warrior at 12+ moons.

Medicine cat - a cat who is trained specifically in the ways of healing. They also receive and interpret omens and prophecies from StarClan. They are highly respected cats by all the Clans.

Apprentice - a cat who is in training to become a warrior or medicine cat. Usually aged between 6-12 moons old. These cats receive a mentor and are trained in both combat and hunting.

Kit - a kitten. Usually aged between 0 - 6 moons old.

There are the potential ranks for cat clans. Seeing as your character is 6 moons old, this makes her an apprentice. You can be either a warrior apprentice or a medicine cat apprentice. But, judging by your form, I take it you're new to cat roleplaying? So, I highly recommend you select warrior apprentice, just until you get into the swing of the roleplay. Smile

Yeah, unforutanely, you will need to change your eye color for your character. Blue eyes for cats is very rare and they usually need to have a highgrade - medium amount of white spotting on their pelt to have blue eyes. Its real cat genetics and is a bit strange like that. So, I suggest a green or a yellow if you wish to maintain the pretty silver-tabby appearance.

And yeah, as Alue mentioned, "Topaz" is an unrealistic name. Cats don't know what crystals and gems are. They usually refer to them as "stones" instead of "Crystal" "Gem" "Topaz" "Jade" etc. There is some really good and realistic names you can find in this guide here (in fact, this guide may be helpful since you're new to cat RP)

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Cat RP can be a bit difficult at first, but, don't worry! Once you're used to it, you'll love it!