CinderFire and AmberFire

Name: CinderFire
Age (in moons, please): 16 moons
Gender (Male / Female): Female
Description of character appearance: CinderFire is large. Her body is built. Cinder has a broad chest and broad shoulders. She has blue eyes and long claws. Her pelt is blue/silver with stripes and spots. She is tall. Cinder's legs are long. She is taller than most cats.
Mate, if any: Nope
Kit(s), if any: Nope
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan: TempestClan
Preferred rank: Warrior
History of character (Optional)
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample):[/b] CinderFire walks in the forest. She perks her ears at nature sounds and animal calls. She carefully walks around the area. Cinder keeps her eyes and ears open as she visits a clan's border.
Special code(s) - Only needed if you're a new user: "Never give up"
Extra(s): About CinderFire
CinderFire is nice, determined, strong, loyal and tough. She likes challenges. She likes to hunt. Cinder doesn't really like to fight. She is smart and wise. She is energetic and agile. Cinder loves to run around with other cats.
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Name: AmberFire
Age (in moons, please): 14 moons
Gender (Male / Female): Female
Description of character appearance: AmberFire is orange with dark reddish orange stripes. She has amber colored eyes. She is tall, medium-large sized and lean. Amber's shoulders are broad. Her fur is medium length.
Mate, if any: Nope
Kit(s), if any: Nope
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan: ValiantClan
Preferred rank: Warrior
History of character (Optional)
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample):[/b] AmberFire walks around the clan's area. She quickly glances at everyone near her. She flicks her tail. Amber pads under a tree. She relaxes there until something happens.
Special code(s) - Only needed if you're a new user: "Never give up"
Extra(s): About AmberFire
Amber is a feisty female with a quick and fierce temper. She often hangs by herself. She will lash out on other cats when they annoy her. She is very kind and loving to her friends. Amber can be very sarcastic and bossy to clan mates who are not her friends. Amber is fast, strong, and agile.
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Where you referred by someone? If so, who? Ravenpaw

Looks good :3 oh and when it comes to roleplaying as a friend i wanted to say maybe you should put more detail in your posts because this is a very realistic roleplaying site. so sentences like "Cinder likes to run around" could be joined in with an other sentance because it kinda sounds short and choppy, same with "Cinderfire is large" large how? is she a broad shouldered cat? you could combine the both "Cinderfire is large" and "Cinderfire is tall" because they both describe the same sort of things and they are both choppy :3 i hope i didnt offend! i just like hepling out ^_^

Thanks for the advice! I will revise that. I will also do better on the bios!^^

Looks good to me!

oh you did good on ur bio, i was just saying you have to be detailed otherwise like i said it sounds choppie x3 i luv ur charries though, my characters are Pure(two and a half moon old kit exiled from sombreclan) Terror (15 moon old tom) Shy (22 moon old shecat) and Sorrow (Terrors sister, she is 14 moons old)

Thank you! I appreciate it very much. I hope to RP with both of you sometime.^^

you toos! :3

ANd I rp as RosePaw and I rp as Cloud and HawkScreech

83 yelpers, were new users too x3 I've been on gbmp for two months now

Aww, you guysss! That's so sweet of you to help out a newbie by giving advice. xD Gawh.

Welcome to the forum, Akauri!! I'm Misery - An Admin here. ^-^

Both your characters have beennnn...


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