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Post by Braveheart2003 Mon Oct 14, 2013 11:35 am

NAME:Dawnwhisker
AGE:19 moons
GENDER:she-cat
APPEARANCE: calico with golden eyes
MATE:none
KIT(S):Bravepaw
CLAN:Starclan
RANK:warrior
RP POST: *Moonwhisker felt her soul slowly slipping away from her body. She knew she would never get to see her kit, but she knew that Sombreclan would take good care of Bravekit yet deep down she knew that Sombreclan can't always look after her kit.* SHE WILL GROW UP, EVENTUALLY.


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Braveheart2003
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Posts : 239
Join date : 2013-09-20
Age : 21
Location : stalking you in your nightmares

Main Character Stats
Character slots:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue6/6Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (6/6)
Health Bar:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue100/100Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Character Mood:: Regretful- Why did I turn him down?

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Post by HowlingStar Mon Oct 14, 2013 10:55 pm

What? Your sign up sheet doesn't make sense. Is BravePaw this character's kit or what? You need to be clearer and put headings of what each thing actually is. E.;g Warrior is what? A rank. So it should be displayed as "Rank: Warrior"

Aiyana wrote:

➥ Moon is also a sacred term and is generally not used within warrior names and clans because the "Moon" represents the "Moonstone" where the leader and/or Medicine cats can communicate with StarClan. (The only known exception to this was Bluestar's mother, who was named Moonflower; however, Erin Hunter stated they could not change her name to Duskflower due to too many uses of Moonflower.)
So, you will need to change your character's name.
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Posts : 3374
Join date : 2012-09-19
Age : 169
Location : Smexyworld, of course. ;)

Main Character Stats
Character slots:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue4/5Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (4/5)
Health Bar:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue90/100Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (90/100)
Character Mood:: Hhhmm..

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Post by Alphess Aiyana Tue Oct 15, 2013 7:27 pm

Just edit the sections Howl marked out and then we can accept this character. Smile
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Main Character Stats
Character slots:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue1/1Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (1/1)
Health Bar:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue98/100Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (98/100)
Character Mood:: We must feed ourselves..

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Post by MiseryCloud Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:03 am

Braveheart2003 wrote:
APPEARANCE:calico with silvery blue whiskers and blue eyes
Cats cannot have blue whiskers. It is not a pigment they have in their whiskers. You'll just need to edit that appearance. Smile
It is also impossible for a calico to have blue eyes. Their eye colour possibility is amber, a golden yellow and green.

Sorry to be a pain, but, you will need to edit the appearance just to meet realism standards.
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Join date : 2013-07-17
Age : 28

Main Character Stats
Character slots:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue5/5Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (5/5)
Health Bar:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue43/100Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (43/100)
Character Mood:: ValiantClan are trying to take back the pines? Good luck to them is all I can say..

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Post by Braveheart2003 Sun Oct 20, 2013 8:01 pm

Bravepaw is calico with blue eyes and howlingstar accepted her, but ok? Neutral 
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Posts : 239
Join date : 2013-09-20
Age : 21
Location : stalking you in your nightmares

Main Character Stats
Character slots:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue6/6Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (6/6)
Health Bar:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue100/100Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Character Mood:: Regretful- Why did I turn him down?

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Post by HowlingStar Sun Oct 20, 2013 11:21 pm

Mis is right. And I have decided to change the realism policy regarding characters. I decided it a few days ago, but, haven't made it official. I'm not going to be insanely strict, but, will be cracking down.

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Posts : 3374
Join date : 2012-09-19
Age : 169
Location : Smexyworld, of course. ;)

Main Character Stats
Character slots:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue4/5Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (4/5)
Health Bar:
Dawnwhisker Left_bar_bleue90/100Dawnwhisker Empty_bar_bleue  (90/100)
Character Mood:: Hhhmm..

https://gbmp.forummotion.com

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