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Post by Guest Thu Sep 12, 2013 9:56 pm

Name: Winter Phoenix (Nickname: Phoenix)
Age and Gender (In moons, please): 10 moons, Male
Description of eye color and pelt: Hazel eyes, with a black tabby pelt with light brown flecks.
Mate: None
Kit(s): None
Preferred Clan/Loner/Kitty-pet: Loner
What rank do you want?:  Loner...
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are!):  Phoenix quickly dodges the flailing paws of the attacking cat.  This is too easy he thinks, slashing at one eye and grabbing a forepaw while it is in the air with his jaws.  He flips over the attacking cat, it looks helpless.  "Don't come back unless you actually want to die!" Phoenix calls after the cat, who had fled, in a cheery tone.
Extra(s): He is a loner, although he works with other loners from time to time.


Last edited by HomunculusFear on Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:41 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Pelt Color)
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Post by HowlingStar Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:00 pm

Was he originally a kittypet?

How does a cat have a greenish-brown pelt? Cats can't be green. Razz
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Post by Aurora Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:08 pm

I'm guessing that's kinda hazel-looking... xD I dunno.
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Post by Guest Fri Sep 13, 2013 12:10 am

Yeah... Like a mixture of light and dark brown, it has a bit of a greenish effect. Phoenix was a kittypet until he turned 5 moons old and he ran away.
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Post by HowlingStar Fri Sep 13, 2013 7:10 pm

Cats can't fur that has a "greenish" effect, at least, in my opinion. If you have research to prove me wrong, then I'll accept it. But, if not, then, no.

And if he ever joins a clan, his name will have to be changed. Sorry, but I don't like kittypets/loners keeping their old names and not having a correct warrior name and etc.

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Post by Guest Sat Sep 14, 2013 12:38 am

I know, I don't mean bright green. I mean the effect of black fur under brown fur kind of makes a dull greenish color in some places on his pelt, It is like that on my kitten. Basically, black undercoat, brown overcoat. I don't mind the name being changed if he joins a Clan.
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Post by MiseryCloud Sat Sep 14, 2013 2:05 am

You shouldn't argue with Howly. If he says he won't accept it unless he has research, then, yeah. Razz You might want to begin researching unless you're prepared to change it.

However, I know that you can get cats with greenish tints, but it is a very new pigment which breeders are only just discovering and it is due to a mutations and exposure to chemicals. I would advise staying away from it as it's a little too crazy to get hectically involved with cat genetics.


"The first green cat was born in north-west Denmark in 1995. Named "Miss Greeny", the kittens was found in a hayloft and it immediately caused a sensation. The kitten's fur and claws were green and the colour could not be washed out. The colouration was initially attributed to a mutation, however a vet attributed it to a copper patina, apparently present since birth, from the tip of its fur to the hair follicles. The high copper content in the local water supply was apparently causing a verdigris effect, but would normally be toxic. Miss Greeny's unusual colour faded as new fur grew through, apparently because she was no longer exposed to copper-rich water."
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Post by HowlingStar Sat Sep 14, 2013 2:18 am

I'm going to agree with Mis on this one. It does seen to complex. Sorry
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Post by Guest Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:11 am

Wow! Okay, black and brown-flecked tabby? I also agree with Misery. Phoenix is a black tabby with brown flecks on the tip of his fur.
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Post by HowlingStar Sat Sep 14, 2013 5:38 pm

Okay, thanks for changing it. Smile

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