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Post by Guest Mon Nov 18, 2013 7:28 pm

I wrote this when I felt lonely:(

Calm is the Sea

Calm is the Sea,
Awaiting the crash of thunder,
When you're with me,
I dive and fall right under..

Drowning in these deep eyes,
How can it be?
I feel these great waves rise,
Swallowing me..

Wild is the Sea,
When he holds you close,
Then pushes you away,
As do the waves of a hurricane,
I'll never be the same.

You can count on me,
Even though you're not here,
I can stand as I bleed!
Silent as a deer..

Calm is the Sea,
When you realize,
You really love me.
I'll fly into your arms,
Then up to the stars<3
We'll never be apart...

Wild is the Sea,
You hold me close,
You'll never leave,

Not even the waves of a hurricane,
Could ever push you away..

Oh Wild is the Sea!
So love, hold on to me<3
Spread your wings
We're forever Free..


I think this poem is one of my best. My friends think I should be a songwriter lol XD


Last edited by She-Wolf on Mon Nov 18, 2013 7:29 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : It needs color XD)
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Post by Magpie Mon Nov 18, 2013 8:19 pm

I really like the first stanza! The rhyme is very good.
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Post by Guest Mon Nov 18, 2013 8:27 pm

Thanks:) I love writing poetry:) I can only write it when it comes to me though.
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