New Character

by Guest Sat Feb 01, 2014 2:58 pm

b]Name:[/b] Bright
Age (in moons, please): 12 moons
Gender (Male / Female): A he.
Description of character appearance: A slim and obviously weak calico cat with green eyes.
Mate, if any: None!
Kit(s), if any: None!
Preferred clan, if any (TempestClan, SombreClan, RillClan and ValiantClan: None!
Preferred rank: None!
History of character (Optional) A kittypet once abandoned by owner, tooken in by clan cat.
RP Style (Please post an in-depth RP post so we can see how experienced you are~ You *only* need to do this for your first character submission. Once you are approved once, there is no need to post another RP sample): A young cat stood on the porch of a now empty house that once belonged to his owner. He remembered desperately trying to jump into the moving car his owner had climbed into before, but this time he was not allowed in. She almost let him jump in, but when a man said that she would not be able to bring her cat to the new house, she hesitantly dropped him. She slowly removed his collar, which he had worn since he was only a kit and throwing it in the trashcan. Without a wave, she left. Three days since, the former kittypet trod through the backyard of his former home, to see a cat staring at him from behind.
Special code(s): Loyalty is what matters!
Extra(s): Eh?
Where you referred by someone? If so, who? Blame Mint/Prota

by **MiseryCloud** Sat Feb 01, 2014 9:01 pm

Komaeda wrote:
Description of character appearance: A slim and obviously weak calico cat with his left eye being green and, his right eye being brown.
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Ooohh, nice to meet you!! Very Happy

I have two small little things I need to discuss with you.

This appearance is great, but.. The multi-colored eyes is a special feature which needs to be purchased through the admin store. Once you gain enough points, you can purchase it. Smile

So, you will need to alter the eye coloration.

Also. You say he was a kittypet? But, his name is Brightpelt. Brightpelt is a full warrior cat name and can only be given to cats within a clan. So, I suggest changing his name to "Bright" and if he joins a clan, then he can be renamed to Brightpelt. Smile