SombreClan Raid - Leafbare.

(Darkeh came back ear still bleeding.)

Darkheart jumped back into the battle blood trickling down his torn ear, he jumped at miserycloud a feirce snarl on his muzzle.

He jumped to the side hissing furiously he tried to bring his forepaw crashing down on his head

(you coulda avoided the muzzle slash :3)

FallenSnow came in, ivy eyes balzing, she went striahgt for Feral, raking her claws across his back.

Morning rolled her icy eyes at Feral and went to aid HowlingStar, swiping at Chipmunkstar with unsheathed claws.

(xD yay fallen has come to the rescue! I really thought I had to bring in Mrs. Bad girl Ravenpaw )

Vengeancebreeze was bloody, tired and weak. He was loosing his lifes energy. Moving just in time to avoid Ferals paw, growling did he see the white pelt of Fallensnow. Relived did he try to give a front paw blow, sloppy with weak did it not send much of its impact.

(Go home vengeancebreeze your bleeding.)

Feralclaw smashed down on vengeancebreeze's forehead, turned around and slashed at fallensnow

(xD fine... Ravens coming through.)

Venny gave up and ran back to VCs medicine cats den.

Ravenpaw came in the battle to see Ven falling back. Skimming her green eyes around did she look for a SC to attack.

"Notice your freind? Do the same thing." Feralclaw hissed

"I dont listan to a mousebrain like you!" She said before attempting to claw his other ear. "Oops sorry! Didn't see you there" she smirked as she provoked him.

(If Howlingstar isn't busy with Chipmuckstar, he can attack her if he wants. Lol. Or anybody else for that matter.)

Berrystripe turned away from Miserycloud, believing she wasn't a match for her and looked for another SombreClan cat to fight. She seen Feralclaw attacking her apprentice Ravenpaw but the she-cat was holding onto her own so Berrystripe didn't move from her spot.

He hammered down with his forepaw before attempting to bowl over her "You dont know me, no one does." he growled deeply

MiseryCloud's vibrant green eyes blazed in anger as Berrystripe turned her back. The she-cat let out a loud, angered cry and dashed towards Berrystripe, her sharp thorn-like-claws aiming to rake down her backside.

Berrystripe's backside got raked by the she-cat's sharp claws. Hissing, Berrystripe turned herself around to face Miserycloud. Berrystripe lifted her paw in the air, hoping to head Miserycloud on the top of her head.

MiseryCloud quickly leaped to the side, dodging the attack. The fluffy black-almost brown she-cat revealed her gleaming white teeth, forming a snarl. She sprang at BerryStripe, this time, aiming for her hind leg.

Berrystripe watched Miserycloud leap towards her and she turned around, lifting up her hind legs attempting to kick Miserycloud in the face.

MiseryCloud quickly tilt her head, helping to minimize some of the impact of the kick. She shook her head, blood dripping down her face. She began to growl, louder as she charged towards the she-cat, her sharp teeth aiming for Berry's shoulder

Berrystripe felt Miserycloud bit her shoulder and she struggled to get free, attempting to claw at Miserycloud's next to free herself.

MiseryCloud nimbly released the she-cat then stepped back, not wishing to get another attack to the face. The fluffy black she-cat shook her pelt out and smirked, "Ready to retreat, yet?" She narrowed her eyes, her eyes gleaming in determination.

Berrystripe was panting, feeling tired and for once bloodly. Her back was bleeding and her shoulder was bleeding. "No... never." She answered before leaping towards Miserycloud.

Fallen slashed at Feral. "Leave her alone," She growled clawing at his ears from behind.

ResoluteStep eyed BerryStripe and darted towards her and MiseryCloud; feeling the need to aid the ValiantClan she-cat.

Marth, you characters is getting unrealistic in my eyes. He is barley hurt after a massive fight and is showing no signs of being tired. You need to fight realistically, If Vengence was so injured he had to retreat - your character should be pretty beat up too. You cat is also new to clans so his fighting skills wouldn't be so perfect and all that. Not being rude, just my opinion.

GrouseWarmth lunges out at Resolute, her eyes blazing with fury.

Dynamic actually does make a very valid point there. Marth, just tighten up the realism reins a bit, please.

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HowlingStar flicked his tail and narrowed his golden yellow eyes, waiting for an opponent to show himself. A fluffy, ginger tom - Preyjaw, leaped out at the silver-tabby, but, HowlingStar was quicker and side-stepped, dodging the attack. HowlingStar shook out his tabby pelt and revealed a sly smile. He then hurled his lean, muscular body at Preyjaw; the leader's claws struck the fluffy tom across the face, leaving large gashes. Preyjaw attempted to block the attack but failed miserably and stumbled backwards. He growled, shoving his head towards the tom in attempt to make him back away. Realizing, that Preyjaw's tactic was failing, he kicked his hind-legs up, aiming for HowlingStar's stomach. The leader winced at the hit but then brought down his large jaws on to Preyjaw's shoulder. Preyjaw felt dizzy, blood spilled out of his large shoulder wound. He stumbled backwards and fell into a heap on the ground. The silver-tabby smirked then dashed away to find a new opponent.

- I attacked and sorta auto-hitted by own characters beccaauuseee...I felt like it. xD

(i always do zat jason XD very well feral go bye bye.)

Feral retreated from the battle bleeding and tired.

"Good riddance." Darkheart muttered hurling himself at miserycloud

MiseryCloud yowled in annoyance and quickly lashed a paw out at Darkheart, her claws shining in the moonlight. The fluffy brown she-cat then leaped back and lashed her legs out towards Berrystripe, "You, again?" She hissed.

(I think it's time that Berrystripe left because of her wounds, so she is going to leave now.)

Berrystripe was getting tired of the fight with Miserycloud. She wanted to continue but she was just to tired. "We will win the pines back." She spoke back to the older she-cat before retreating back to camp.

Soon after a black white and grey Tom burst through the shadows smelling strongly of VC his eyes narrowed

GrouseWarmth lunges at the VC warrior (Played by Racoon), trying to put him off balance.

"PreyJaw!" The storm hued warrior growled and dashed down to the warrior's side. "PreyJaw!" The deputy shouted, "Come on, PreyJaw, you need to get to the medicine cat den," he said. The storm colored tom quickly jerked his head up and glanced around, checking to see how far any enemy warriors were, in case he would be attacked while trying to help a VC warrior.

(i have no clue whats going on but for a bit of sceaming so correct me on whut happened xD)

Ravenpaw seen her mentor getting beat she yowled in outrage and fear for her mentor. She was about to attack when getting hit in the head and being bowled over. She was dizzy and couldent foucas her green orbes on anything. Feeling another cat by her and the yell of Fallen did she finally foucas her eyes. Feeling the weight lift did she bounce up before hearing yowling. Her eyes failed as she spun around trying to locate the yowl. Stummbling around did she clear her head to see Prayjaw on the ground. So confused did she walk over to him and her deputy. "I'll take him... I think i need to see the medicaine cat too..." She tried to look at him while everything spun. Her head ached at was getting her sick to the stumache. Her green eyes were weired by one being slited and the other open. She knew she had a concushion so she didnt dare fight and more. "Ow.." she moaned as she fastned her teeth on Payjaws scruff. "You need to stay here to fight for our clan. Come on Preyjaw you gotta help me." She growled getting angry at her headache.


(Hehe i want Ray to get messed up! so evil of me... xD)

Haunting Dodges Grouse Seeing Her Leap At Him, As He Leaps To The Side He Charges At Her Flank Eyes Narrowed

(Did you mean Hauntinggaze?)

GrouseWarmth flexes her claws, her agile frame making it easy to dodge, yet she chooses not to. The she-cat waits for the tom to get close before leaping over his head and attempting to nimbly land on his back.

DropletSong races to the battle scene, looking for something to do. She instantly spots the deputy and new warrior and races over to them. "You carry on fighting!" She mews loudly to him, trying to be heard over the noise, "I will take PreyJaw back to camp!" The feline gently nudges PryJaw, trying to see if he is strong enough to get up.

(Yeah sorry Lol xD Name mix up :3)

As the she-cat landed on his back he immediately rolled onto the floor attempting to crush her beneath his weight

She narrows her eyes, digging her claws into his back. When the tom-cat rolls, the she-cat hisses in pain, but uses her rage to kick up hard with all her limbs, attempting to send the other feline flying.

As he stood up quickly he growled his back stinging he then darted up to her lashing his long claws at her muzzle hissing angrily

"SombreClan!" The leader boomed, "Retreat!" The silver-tabby howled his words, his eyes ran across his warriors- MiseryCloud, Grousewarmth, Feralclaw, having decided that losing his warriors lives were not worth it; they had collected enough prey from the Pines to survive much longer than they would. "Retreat, SombreClan! Retreat!"

Haunting stopped and backed away hissing to Grouse, "You heard him" he glared lashing out his claws, "LEAVE" he hissed loudly eyes narrowing but holding humor

MiseryCloud snapped her jaws at Hauntinggaze, "we're not deaf!" She hissed to him, before rapidly turning away and darting in the direction of SombreClan camp.

Haunting smirked unfazed "Then move it" he hissed lashing his tail his eyes were icy

"Shut your muzzle," Morning muttered and retreated, scrapes along her side.

FallenSnow gave a smirk, delighted they had won back their territory.

"Or what?" he hissed after her "we won" he snapped smirking as he lashed his tail watching the SC retreat

CreekStorm cried out in agony as she sighted Preyjaw. She bounded up to Ravenpaw and Preyjaw and flattened her ears. "He can't be too hurt.." She said softly, her eyes wild. "Let's go to the medicine cat den," she said softly.

ChipmunkStar let out a yowl of triumph , "We took back what is ours!" She howled. Shooting a swift look at PreyJaw, she darted to him in rapid speed. "PreyJaw?"

GrouseWarmth hisses, glaring at HauntingGaze, before retreating after her leader.

ResoluteStep elevated his gaze, his golden eyes fastened on the SombreClan cats. "Get your fility paws off ValiantClan territory," he spat in annoyance, anger enraged him as he lowered his gaze to wounded Preyjaw. "Ravenpaw," he said, softly to the apprentice, "You need to get to the medicine cat den, too," he said, his ears flat in worry.

"Not to mention, smelly paws." She gave the slightest of grins, and looked over to PreyJaw, the grin disappearing.

HowlingStar narrowed his golden yellow eyes then disappeared into the shadows.

Preyjaw weakly opened his eyes and got up. The small warrior was in a lot of pain. He flattened his ears to the cats around then slowly got up and wobbled towards the medicine cat den.

ResoluteStep got up, following after him, wanting to ensure he was okay.